Great story. Good description, easy read, solid world-building, and better description than most Webnovel stories. Very well done, but I feel this one is just short of 5 stars. Why? I think it needs a little more of two things. Tension and dialogue. Tension doesn't mean people have to die or get hurt. Not necessarily. Maybe people have intense arguments. Perhaps a storm happen. Perhaps it's created by how you write the story. Maybe it's romantic tension. But I need to feel something just a little more, gripping. I'd also like to see a bit more dialogue here to make the characters feel a bit more real. To make it feel like I know them a little better. Some chapters seem to have a lapse in dialogue.
mskim133
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LIKENice, if you're interested. You should check out my story, "Avatar: Macai's Journey." It's an Avatar: The Last Airbender fanon spinoff.
mskim133:thanks for your review, this is my first novel and the first few haven't been edited yet. But I can guarantee that the latter chapters do pick up dramatically and they are not at all far away from the first few chapters. Happy reading!