Reviews of The Ogre
The Ogre
PrimeNexusX
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I love the idea: Hanma + Naruto world. Generally, I dislike OP mc's, but in this, I don't mind! So please don't give this up! I really want to read it!
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Author, here's a storyline after you've finished the story arc with Senju and Uchiha war, have him grow even stronger and during his travels save a woman who joins him and they fall in love and have a kid (but don't make him indifferent to his family) and then set up a village (or join Konohagakure as a clan but not that interesting) and make it an open secret village (like people know of it but don't where it is) and have it be a paradise using his modern architectural knowledge and set it up in a mountain and using secret methods he's found he's able to attract natures energy faster and purer to the village, using it to also cloak the village in mist like Hoshigakure (Star village) and after he's rescued a few people and villages and brought them to become his villagers and setting everything up he has a few other children with his wife (not wives, please no harem cos they don't do that in Naruto, will ruin the story) aka daughter and son maybe and after he's done he cultivates in seclusion and occasionally goes out with his family but mostly hunts down bandits and criminals to keep his Ogre reputation alive and he occasionaly attacks or helps konoha until the naruto arc. Just a suggestion. :)
Hey author! Are you gonna continue this great story or not!? Cause its a waste to drop this wonderful novel of yours! Just gave and permit to continue this great story to other author who wants to continue it so we can read more of this!! Uts a waste really to forgot it! Because its only the one who has a story of hanma yujiro! Why is no one want to create a fan fiction of the ogre except you?
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When can you update more chapters? I'm really excited now and it's too long to wait! When can you update more chapters? I'm really excited now and it's too long to wait! When can you update more chapters? I'm really excited now and it's too long to wait! When can you update more chapters? I'm really excited now and it's too long to wait!
