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Though I really enjoyed your fma arc even if it was short. I would like if you re-visited it.
I'll leave it to the author. I trust in your work more than my decision.
The author’s note is completely unnecessary. You’ve started off with Zero notes but now half the chapters consist of you explaining your writing. Those that complain won’t even care about it, they are just bored and want someone to troll. I am mentioning this because it’s frustrating to see the redundant A/N and since other newbie authors gave up due to this.
Damn I am heartbroken💔. No worries I hope you find the other site more accommodating. Best of luck. Sincere fan.
There was no need for the racist dialogue within the chapter. Also plz add a brief background summary of the team as an index, I am having difficulty remembering the players. On another note, I like that you’ve taken full advantage of the first two mission worlds. One aspect that I think should be improved is the skill description and reason for purchase. Although I like the cultivation addition, I have difficulty appreciating it since you’ve yet to mention the benefits to any of the realms he’s broken through.
Starting to regret discovering this novel early. I’ve become way too addicted and always anticipating new releases. Feeling awful! A sign of a good author is when the readers feel a 5k chapter as 1k. Congrats because that’s what I feel.
Likewise, I am fully enjoying the novel so far. Don’t give the frustrating comments any thought. Hope to see David personally fighting soon.