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The Lost and The Gone
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The Lost and The Gone

JustLikeWriting777

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What is The Lost and The Gone

The Lost and The Gone is a popular web novel written by the author JustLikeWriting777, covering MYSTERY, HORROR, THRILLER, DARK, PAST, TRUTH, TERROR, Horror&Thriller genres. It's viewed by 23.7K readers with an average rating of 4.77/5 and 32 reviews. The novel is being serialized to 33 chapters, new chapters will be published in Webnovel with all rights reserved.

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Seven months ago, five girls went out camping. The next day, four were found dead. One of those murdered girls was Lukas Wells' elder sister, Jesse. The only girl who survived, blames his sister, claiming that she saw Jesse kill the other girls. Everyone believes her. Everyone except Lukas. Now, He's determined to find out the truth, searching for the real killer, But what he doesn't know, that this killer already knows his every step, confusing him before he could even do anything. And all he's thinking now is that maybe he went too far, especially when he finds out that Skylar's younger sister knows more than he thinks. Cover ain't mine but you gotta admit it's good, right?

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Dara_Manuel
Dara_ManuelLv3Dara_Manuel

How do I put it, this book is bloody amazing, I could feel everything through your words, I admit that I felt scared, anxious and shock because that's how good emphasized the story. I can't wait to see how the mystery will be solved

uniqueanime2
uniqueanime2Lv2uniqueanime2

Ok this has a lot of mystery and I love it so much😩. I'm currently still reading and can't wait until there are more chapter/parts available.

qiujiu068
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to contact rebecca.review@outlook.com. A brief introduction, some sample chapters, or links will be appreciated when reaching out.

Esther_Heredia
Esther_HerediaLv2Esther_Heredia

In the last few weeks I have read several mystery stories... yours has definitely caught up with me. Definitely nothing is what it seems. Keep writing.

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

Kudos author for your work. Mystery novels are a hooking one when they are thrilled to see what happens. Not knowing everything at first then little by little, the answer becomes clear. Good job on the prologue chapter one. If I can hear the MC's voice, welp I will get goosebumps and if it has background horror music then it will be an experience worth remembering. I am talking of it becoming a game in the future.....I hope it will get popular and in the right time, your novel will get popular.

LOVE097
LOVE097Lv4LOVE097

This novel.... It moved me. I have to be honest that I am not a fan of tragedy. But this story portrays the grief in just right amount. I can relate to it but I don't cry. This is just perfect for me. And the mystery part is amazing. I hope to see more of this novel author A big thumbs up for ur writing 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😍😍

liyanpark1013
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Omo! ┏(^0^)┛ I really like this one, there's mystery that you can see in the story. When I reading this, it gives me chills which is what I want in every story! keep up the good work and I hope more update! Goodluck (*˘︶˘*).。*♡

Gery_
Gery_Lv4Gery_

Amazing. I can only say this. AMZING!!! Great story with mystery everywhere. I can recommend this to anyone. Keep up the good work, because it is amazing!!!!!

EldritchTheDead
EldritchTheDeadLv2EldritchTheDead

Mysterious as the shrouded and dramatic as a painting. I love how the first chapter starts. It takes you into the world of the protagonist. In some ways it brings a lot of questions that could potentially hook a reader. The portrayal of emotion is astounding as every sentence can hold a tight grip on curious minds. I love how the author has written this story. More power to the author please keep writing.

ephemery
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I love your book. First chapter in and I was already in awe with your writing skill. The mystery element also added to the excitement and curiosity. Though I suggest you minimize the narrations and make the character come to life. I understand the MC's grief although reading it is too much, I would like to know more about him and not just the side of him who mourns for his sister :) Over all, good job with the book!

SolAce
SolAceLv3SolAce

Added to library. Why? Because I love mystery, and this definitely gives me those vibes. I think the main character can be polished more. The first chapter was intriguing, but at the same time, he seems to have a whole negative view of how the world looks at him and his dead sister. Which I don’t really mind, but some readers might. Overall, I would read this. Good work author !

pelzy
pelzyLv4pelzy

The description makes me shiver but in a good way. It really captures someone so I will definitely see what this book has to offer. Good luck.

Hua_Li_An
Hua_Li_AnLv3Hua_Li_An

This has enormous potential, but it's tricky to pull off. By potential, I mean like being a complete hit, like 13 Reasons Why. The story is already unique because of the way it's written. It's a first person narrative, but he's always speaking with his sister. Now, if it's done properly, I can easily imagine it flying off the shelves. The problem, though, is that it still needs a lot of work. ***Note to author*** -The first chapter was nice, and I could glean through the sad messages to his sister, but using it too much in the later chapter can become off-putting. I'm not saying to stop it, but I dare say that too much sadness can make the readers put the book down. -Characterization: The MC is a loner now, so there are little interactions with other people. That becomes a problem because it becomes harder to insert dialogue into a big wall of texts. How to potentially solve it? Add a certain character trait to the MC that makes the readers want to know more about him. Right now, he's only a sad brother who got his sister murdered. Is he spunky? If he's a nerd, I can't sense it through his narration. Think more about how to engage the readers more. -Too many narration can be off-putting. I know it can be hard, but do your best to think of a solution to this. So, that's it. I'm actually feeling really excited about how this book will turn out if it can get polished a lot. I see humongous potential, so I do hope I could read it in its best form in the future. Good luck, dear author! I'm rooting for you.

miyukii
miyukiiLv3miyukii

amazing book, well written and I love the way author represent the characters. element of mystery makes me read more, I am still reading and eagerly waiting for new chapters good luck author and keep up!

Filea
FileaLv4Filea

It has European feeling on it with some (maybe dark) mysterious veil on it. The quality writing brings me into the story and gave me an easy to imagine the setting. *May I ask the author if the title is intentional? Why no title and only ch1 like that?

deepu_
deepu_Lv6deepu_

At first chapter felt like I was reading 13 reason why.. This is so well written.. Dear reader if your are into mystery grab this book I will not disappointed

Princeboi
PrinceboiLv1Princeboi

I believe to give a more solid review, I need to read the whole thing. First of all, language is beautiful, the short sentences are good at empathizing pain and showcase how the character is feeling, I love that. Secondly, the content and the flow is great, I don't feel like that the story is just fast-forwarding, there are pauses, there are times when one has to take no breaks. I love that. The character dialogues hep us fo relate to the character and feel his tragic past and emotions

raima_alam
raima_alamLv2raima_alam

An amazing book from an amazing writer. To tell honestly I really enjoyed it. I really hope that this books gets popular cause its a fine piece of Gem. Keep on writing like this author.

Joskylar
JoskylarLv3Joskylar

Good story. I can get the concept from the synopsis. And in first chapter I really feel her pain . It's really nice you expressed it in very nice. Good work. Amizing crime thriller. Keep going.

Nocturnal_Dreamer
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An amazing novel that we can look upon to. The story is still developing and still has a lot to offer as the story progress. But this is my initial rate to the author to show my support.

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