Item: The Lost and The Gone
Rating: 4.6

EldritchTheDeadLv24yr

2020-08-28 10:57

Mysterious as the shrouded and dramatic as a painting. I love how the first chapter starts. It takes you into the world of the protagonist. In some ways it brings a lot of questions that could potentially hook a reader. The portrayal of emotion is astounding as every sentence can hold a tight grip on curious minds. I love how the author has written this story. More power to the author please keep writing.

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