SolAce
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SolAce1yrReplied to DrakonousCh 23 From author - hiatus on webnovel indefinitely- SolAce1yrReplied to DrakonousCh 23 From author - hiatus on webnovel indefinitely
- SolAce2yrReplied to Houraji
No problem, sorry I couldn’t read yours more…. time is literally sand rn
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spewing* the white crystals….and piling* (almost like a compound verb after “by”) Or spewing* the white crystals from the grey cloudy sky, which* piled up
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those spoke* of white* rather than “those were speak for white”
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Not gonna lie, Kain is acting rather humble here. Does he respect Damien already?
A rowdy bang comes from a glass door, as Kain slowly approaches the doorway. "Oo! Damien, so glad you could make it to my humble estate on this ravishing afternoon," Kain exclaims in pleasantry, after opening the doorway. - SolAce2yrCommented
Because behind that hideous figure lied a past that formed the current creature and a memory it wished to never disclose.* This is what I think you meant to say, and the reason for no comma is because you can reverse the latter part with the beginning. Ex) A past that formed the current creature and a memory it wished to never disclose lied behind that hideous figure.
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Doing alright, still drowning in studies
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Hmm, an easy death to be fair. Not sure if a person would even feel pain because of the initial shock
This paragraph has been deleted. - SolAce2yrCommentedCh 1 Moonlight Rendezvous
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There’s no way this Darius would cheat later, right ?
"Robin Hood," Yu Pengkai and Darius declared in perfect unison, their voices overlapping one another's. - SolAce2yrCommentedCh 23 Counters and Bans
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- SolAce2yrReplied to JustLikeWriting777
Thanks, this was very comforting to see! Mainly because I had a really terrible posting schedule, so I had supposed that most would be dissuaded or had given up on the novel. I hope to make some time for myself after settling into college to write to my heart’s content. Whether it’s a year or two later, I swear I’ll finish this book the way I have in mind.
- SolAce2yrReplied to Houraji
Heh, exactly! College is an experience I’ll never forget, might as well make it into a happy one. (｀・∀・´) And the same goes for you, I hope college life won’t be too stressful and be smooth sailing. On the other hand, I look forward to the day when we can both finish our books. (● ˃̶͈̀ロ˂̶͈́)੭ꠥ⁾⁾ See you again soon!
Ch 23 From author - hiatus on webnovel indefinitely - SolAce2yrReplied to Houraji
May or may not have taken some scenes out
I've managed to rewrite the first 5-6 chapters up to now, but I still have to do 16 more chapters, not including the new chapters that I have to plan. Hence, for the readers who were still keeping this lazy author's work in the library, I'm so sorry. - SolAce2yrReplied to HourajiCh 22 Another Dream
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Ahem, seems like I have to improve my transitions
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