Although I really really liked this story but the grammer is really pushing me away from reading it further. I am sorry dear author but I will quit here for now and come back later if the book gets edited. It will really be one of the best storyline if grammer is improvised. Keep up the good work.

Oh really? Which one is it?

Seems like a new couple alert... Yang Yutang Sis and Xie Yufan...

let me know if you need any help 😃 you can drop by a msg any time 🙂 good luck

You are doing awesome. Story line is good. But yeah a lot of grammatical mistakes. Let me know if you need editor to remove grammer mistakes. I won't be editing on huge scale just can help you with small grammar mistakes as I have time constraints as well so I am willing to do it at free cost as long as I get to read book at free cost. Note : I am passionate reader and author myself.😁👍

There are always ppl criticising you and your work. I faced same issues with my second novel. But I just said one thing : my theme is contemporary romance. To gather inspiration I read. I read a lot. And when you read a lot, some things create a image in your mind which later on may develop as a outline of your story. It's very natural to write something similar to what you read or get inspired from and is followed by worldwide authors. And ofcourse all romances are same yet different with their own twists so similarity is mere a coincidence. So don't pay attention to such comments. You are doing amazing work

Awww. I think the grammar is perfect in initial chapters as well. We all have minute mistakes so you should really be proud that your work is amazing. I will definitely try other novel of yours once I catch up with this one. It's is very well written with perfect plot line up. Keep up the good work. Kudos.

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Loved it. Must read.. Tbh I am loving this story a lot. The plot is completely different and most importantly there is this sweetness and affection in all relationships. No wickedness at all as of now. No shrewd in laws or scum bf or sluty bestfriend. Overall very nice and positive vibes while reading this story. Hope it stays like this in coming chapters as well. Wonderful work Author. Being a author myself I know how much efforts we need to put it. I gave up in mid due to other priorities but looking forward to read this story getting unfold. Lots of love 💕 and wishes for success.

Tbh I am loving this story a lot. The plot is completely different and most importantly there is this sweetness and affection in all relationships. No wickedness at all as of now. No shrewd in laws or scum bf or sluty bestfriend. Overall very nice and positive vibes while reading this story. Hope it stays like this in coming chapters as well. Wonderful work Author. Being a author myself I know how much efforts we need to put it. I gave up in mid due to other priorities but looking forward to read this story getting unfold. Lots of love 💕 and wishes for success.

Okay.. so I am super confused but after reading the responses to readers with same issues, I have decided to read it a bit more like 20chapters or something and see if I can get with the storyline. 🤞

Thanks a lot.

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Loved the cover.. :) The writing style if very unique that really refines the scenarios in the author's peculiar way. It brings out the authenticity of the writing itself thus immersing yourself deeper into it. Story plot is also immersive and very well designed. Please keep writing! Good work.

Excellent story with a perfect plot, totally original and creative, I enjoyed every interaction throughout the story. Truth to be told, this story has the potential to be one of the famous books.keep on writing and keep up the excellent work. Good luck, author, and fighting!

Awesome story!!💜✨ Really creative and original, I was able to imagine every bit of the interaction, it was like I was watching a movie in my head😂, I love it!!.

I am at chapter 5 and so far the story I read is really interesting. The plot is very well developing and the world set up in extremely well detailed. Other than very minor mistakes here and there, overall the quality is perfect and really shows that the author has paid attention to every detail. Also, efforts can be seen taken by the author to make it easy to read yet interesting. The fight scenes are very well written and i am loving this novel so far. Good work author. Well done. :)

Wonderfully written. Loved this chapter....

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