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I do not usually fall into Systems novels so easily but I am shamelessly doing so now; this book is an exponential step above the rest! From our Male Lead, whose story is rooted in the seasons of life, to witty chapter titles, I have thoroughly enjoyed the progression of this story so far. Every stage of this story has been well executed. Each character feels unique. The author’s English expression is magnificent! Safe within my library, I’ll be waiting for updates to this book.
Hello this is brandon gould this is my review of your book The story was very interesting and well written, the world and charters are described will and i get a sense of what the rules of the universe are That being said as i was reading i kept thinking besides the black hole Why does he need to fix the universe, where is the conflict will progress the story motioving the MC to action ? A suggestion would be and you might be hinting at it, that the UVS is not what they seem to be and Master Isuh who i like and would want more devlompt from has a altertive motive but beside that it is a very interesting story and i hope you win the contest
The Legendary Systems Engineer is a very good book in my opinion through the rather hard sci-fi premise(everything is explained through conventional science when possible) that is intermixed with litrpg elements. It's an original take that I haven't seen much of on WN, and the writing quality is good and allows for smooth reading. I haven't seen any glaring issues with the book personally and it was a pleasant, albeit short read so I'll be looking forward to the future releases. Keep up the good work!
I would be interested in where it goes after Newton's laws of gravity are done. Its a giant system world while initially similar to the Matrix But isn't the Matrix. Good job. Now it is at the beginning but in the future, it will be fun to add Einstein's laws of relativity with Feyman's work in gravitational physics. Or perhaps even Hawking's Black Hole area theorem.