Hello this is brandon gould this is my review of your book The story was very interesting and well written, the world and charters are described will and i get a sense of what the rules of the universe are That being said as i was reading i kept thinking besides the black hole Why does he need to fix the universe, where is the conflict will progress the story motioving the MC to action ? A suggestion would be and you might be hinting at it, that the UVS is not what they seem to be and Master Isuh who i like and would want more devlompt from has a altertive motive but beside that it is a very interesting story and i hope you win the contest
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LIKEFantasyBliss30:Thank you so much, Brandon and that is a great suggestion. I will definitely add a chapter early to insert that conflict! [img=recommend]