This work is both relaxing and entertaining to read . With only two chapters out I wasn’t able to get a complete picture, but what I was able to read was promising. Good grammar and a wonderful pacing make this story absolutely lovely. The writing style itself could use some polishing, but I believe it to top many other works here on webnovel. Good work, I applaud you.
Your writing is one of the best so far. You made everything look vivid, the details in how the story is narrated is very well written. I can follow the progress easily. Here are my thoughts as a reader. It is fun to read, descriptive, exciting and interesting. I cannot speak about much since there are only two chapters. However, with the level of your skill I believe that your story may captivate more readers soon. Good luck in your endeavor. I hope that you'll continue your good work! 😊😊😊
Overall the story starts off very well and continues to keep the reader entertained, I love how you leave off with a cliffhanger to attract the reader back to your novel. The only reason it's not 5/5 is due to the lack of chapters to read and update frequency, seeing how it took over 2 weeks just to get part 2 of chapter 1. With all that said, I'm giving you a solid 4.5 great work!
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