Overall the story starts off very well and continues to keep the reader entertained, I love how you leave off with a cliffhanger to attract the reader back to your novel. The only reason it's not 5/5 is due to the lack of chapters to read and update frequency, seeing how it took over 2 weeks just to get part 2 of chapter 1. With all that said, I'm giving you a solid 4.5 great work!
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