Your writing is one of the best so far. You made everything look vivid, the details in how the story is narrated is very well written. I can follow the progress easily. Here are my thoughts as a reader. It is fun to read, descriptive, exciting and interesting. I cannot speak about much since there are only two chapters. However, with the level of your skill I believe that your story may captivate more readers soon. Good luck in your endeavor. I hope that you'll continue your good work! đđđ
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