Jozan
I loved the way author wrote this story- especially the narrative style. The novel has a good plot and it appears promising. The author is successful in depicting the emotions portrayed by the characters with a strong background information. I am looking forward for reading more. Keep up the good work author 👍
this isn't your typical fantasy story. it's filled with vast real-world experiences that help you meet the protagonist in their world. I've been following the book for a while and think it's amazing especially if I don't read many books in this genre. the world background is very descriptive and your given much detail about the occurring events. the updating stability needs some work but it's worth the wait I love where the story is going and hardly found any grammatical or spelling errors that disturbed my reading 🤗❤ I highly recommend it!🥺
A perfectly horrendous opening, goblin violence and a great start to this story. Shelly seems like a good character that will undoubtedly shine to mske this a fascinating book! 📖 The writing quality is rather good and very few issues can be found. Gobin Slayer 2.0 here! Sorry for the late review swap!
I haven't take part in the deeper chapters of the story, but I must say that you've done well writing the novel. It looks good, sounds good, and the plot/synopsis/and story fits together! All I can say is that you need to focus on the dialogues and decription after the conversations. Although, this varies from author to author, this is a general way you to have a klick start that can grab the attention of readers. Overall, I think after reading few first chapters really piqued my interest, and I can't wait to see the achievements for this book!
I gotta say, after reading your story it was very interesting and I would love to keep on reading it. The plot was great and it has a lot of fun ideas and the main duo's interaction was great too. My only gripe with story is the structure and sometimes it is hard to understand each character's traits but overall, it is definitely a great read!
Okay first let us get it off with.. update rate is inconsistent, but the story plotline is good. Loved the synopsis, the pace of the dialogues were well balanced. I liked the story so far, the world is a little lacking but that is becoz it is in first person POV. the character designs are cool.. Overall author if you write more frequently I would love to read the story... it has nice fuffy comedy and a good pace to support itself.