Review Detail of kuhaku_sora in The Epic Adventures of Maou and Shelly

I haven't take part in the deeper chapters of the story, but I must say that you've done well writing the novel. It looks good, sounds good, and the plot/synopsis/and story fits together! All I can say is that you need to focus on the dialogues and decription after the conversations. Although, this varies from author to author, this is a general way you to have a klick start that can grab the attention of readers. Overall, I think after reading few first chapters really piqued my interest, and I can't wait to see the achievements for this book!