Reviews of The Demonsong Epic By the Brandon Gould who wrote Chossen Heros of Tylingariea
The Demonsong Epic By the Brandon Gould who wrote Chossen Heros of Tylingariea
Brandongould1994
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
hai, I've to say that at very first of few chapters, the story development is come out of nowhere and it gives me a confused feeling about it. Like we don't know what's happening, who's the real identity of the mc or stuff like that. And the world building is kinda off somehow at suddenly there's this village and then there's this city. Like where are there located or situated for and how the world system works is still left me at lost. As for characters, in the very first chapter, the conversation between the mc and the others is like out of npc games where plot just happen out of nowhere, classic np fantasy. Even the villain character suddenly say stuff like " that sword is my weakness! " to the mc is like out of very classic and old fantasy storybook. I have suggestions to improve in characters development or maybe rewrite the chapters if u don't mind. Updating stability is nice the author gives a lot of chapter so there's no comments on that. Writing quality of describing the events at how it happens is a bit lacking In my opinion for the first few chapters, but I think the author already improve on that after seeing that story have hundreds of chapters already. So overall, that's what I wanna say, haha. Keep up with the writing and don't ever give up, author
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hello this is the author of the Demonsong Epic i would just like to thank all of you who are still reading this book and i have moved on from Demonsong to a new project called the Tylingariea Epic. it is a series that i have been working on for the past eight years and am very proud of how it is turning out Enji Vermillion the king of Kalgorrack is dying and on his death bed he passes his kingdome to his youngest son Calingar and is told of a prophecy that at a unknown time a great and powerful evil even greater then that of Lupine Riddle will arose. but six figures each from diffrent worlds will come to stop this evil and ten days after the last of the six arrives the great and powerful evil shell make himself known to the Worlds of Tylingariea
Hi everyone this is the autor just wanted to let you all know that i am moving away from Webnovel and i will be transfering all of my content to Wattpad a large portion of my chapters are on there already and i intend to take the whole book and move it over there. this is just a heads up hope to see all of you guys there bye
This is part of a review swap. Sorry for being very late, you do have a very long book. I decided to stop at least midway from when I started to read. Maybe around 218+ since you keep updating. Also warning, this is long. I'll start right off the bat saying that normally this genre is not exactly what I'd read. At least not for this site. So take what you will with a grain of salt. In terms of what I liked about it, the world is actually very interesting when you get to it. I especially enjoyed the tidbits in the beginning of each chapter about what era it was or what city or what not. I also enjoyed the names of the land in general, it definitely makes it feel more fantasy like. I did have a slight intrigue with the different powers and it was a shame I couldn't read more of how exactly they work. Also, great job with the consistent updating with the book. I get new notifications every day since you upload it multiple times per day. Great for those who read the story in it's entirety. There is the fact, however, that you should try to be more descriptive in your writing. Places where a dramatic shot can happen ended up with the even being stated as if it was some history book. I also found that there was a lot of things that had no context at all for being there. Especially when random tidbits of IRL life is thrown in, like when you introduced the main villain as being called (by some) as the slender man. Pieces like these throw the reader out of the immersion and, for a fantasy book, that's not what you want to happen. Especially early on where it could deter new readers. There are a few other things I want to touch upon but I decided this review is long enough as it is. Bottom line is that a little bit of descriptive writing can go a long way with your book and this fantasy world is incredibly interesting when you're able to make sense of it. Best of luck to you dear author. Keep writing!
As a reviewer I enjoyed this book and the authors clever character names. The premise of the book interested me. It is a blend of sci fi and fanstey set in a world called Tylingaria. The main character is complex and deep, I cant wait to see where his story will lead. I hope the author creates more unique adventures for the main character.
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To get the worst thing out first, the technical aspects of your writing, Grammar, spelling and even the tenses used at times need some help. Or the first chapters, which are any readers first exposure need to be edited for them. Idealy you would find someone with a good grasp of the English language and have them look your writing over before publishing. As such people are usualy not easy to find, using a spellchecking software would help your early chapters a lot. Now this all aside, your story does have a lot of promise, the characters so far have their own 'vocies' so to speak, and seem to be reasonably well thoughtout. The story so far is progressing slowly but seems to be building up steadily. The worldbuilding too is quite nice, although I did take a star off for your hamfisted approach at it. Suddenly reading a paragraph that gives a rather objective description of the species of flora/fauna in question is a little jarring, but as that is somethign that would improve with practice, I assume it will get better with further chapters.
As for the story is quite interesting and the world background along with the character design is also amazing but the problem is more grave. I don't give a critique review mostly because of one solid reason which is that every writer learns with the pace of time. But I wanted to tell that few things are urgent to be fixed for the sake of the story. Goodluck Author
Technical wise. Grammar is good, plot is well written, and the words used are very appropriate. I can be really choosy when it comes to fantasy novels, though I haven't really gone far yet and can't give a really long review but from what I've read so far it's not disappointing and it's worth for another session if binge reading. Good job author!