Review Detail of _Sha in The Demonsong Epic By the Brandon Gould who wrote Chossen Heros of Tylingariea

As for the story is quite interesting and the world background along with the character design is also amazing but the problem is more grave. I don't give a critique review mostly because of one solid reason which is that every writer learns with the pace of time. But I wanted to tell that few things are urgent to be fixed for the sake of the story. Goodluck Author