Review Detail of RandomGuy in The Demonsong Epic By the Brandon Gould who wrote Chossen Heros of Tylingariea

hai, I've to say that at very first of few chapters, the story development is come out of nowhere and it gives me a confused feeling about it. Like we don't know what's happening, who's the real identity of the mc or stuff like that. And the world building is kinda off somehow at suddenly there's this village and then there's this city. Like where are there located or situated for and how the world system works is still left me at lost. As for characters, in the very first chapter, the conversation between the mc and the others is like out of npc games where plot just happen out of nowhere, classic np fantasy. Even the villain character suddenly say stuff like " that sword is my weakness! " to the mc is like out of very classic and old fantasy storybook. I have suggestions to improve in characters development or maybe rewrite the chapters if u don't mind. Updating stability is nice the author gives a lot of chapter so there's no comments on that. Writing quality of describing the events at how it happens is a bit lacking In my opinion for the first few chapters, but I think the author already improve on that after seeing that story have hundreds of chapters already. So overall, that's what I wanna say, haha. Keep up with the writing and don't ever give up, author