Reviews of The Cries of the Villain

very nice book 🤩🤩🤩 so detailed and the vocab is superb!!! Chicken wing chicken wing Hot dog and baloney chicken and macaroni Chillin' with my homie —so these lyrics are obviously very heartfelt to me bcoz i am a chicken wing

3 chapters in, and I have to say... Intriguing premise and execution! Really love the first chapter, as it sets out an end-goal of the story (or at least what I believe to be so for now...). Makes it such an interesting read to see how things slowly go to that end. Nevertheless, love Xena as the MC and would love to read more! Keep on doing what you're doing, Author!

Honestly, an amazing story! Added to my library to watch out for further updates. The world building, characters, and the story are all very well written and thought out! It's difficult to see anything grammatically incorrect, though I did spot a few repetitions of some words! However, I don't think that small mistake could constitute for anything less than 5 stars! Well done.

Hey, this book got a lot of chills on the title itself! Nice metaphor on the first part, and the author should post another chapter because it really left me hanging!♥️💯

I only giving review based on 2 chapter. Sigh, to short. Nice metaphor at chapter 1. Better than mine. I like how you describe the lead as a weakling in the beginning, it will make anticipation bigger for later on.

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So, The writing quality is good, understandable, and simple. There is a flow, though it is broken sometimes by the long sentences, overall it is good. Updates are stable... As someone who cares more about quality than quantity, this has what I need. The Character Design... the evolvement of characters in the story is good. Hope you are able to keep it up throughout the story. It's just the start so I am not going to comment more on it. Yes... the best part. The world... I wanna scream HELL YEAH! because the world is done so well... I would say it's fantastic. The dialogues are well made and the world between them is described well... I think this is the charm of the overall story... If you improve your writing quality a little and make the flow this world will be amazing IMO....

This story seems actually interesting. Kinda caught my eyes already reading the title of the first chapter, and reading through it I can say it’s an intriguing novel to read.

This story is so good that I immediately it to my library🥰 i did not even notice the mistakes in this story, since it was so good my eye did not notice the mistakes and focused on the story itself. The story gave me chills and even the title itself. Waiting for more😍😍

An underrated book! The opening is superb, pulling you in before unravelling the inside. The descriptions and the way emotions are expressed never fail to immerse me in the world. I sympathise deeply with the characters. I hope the author keeps up the great work!