Review Detail of BRPever in The Cries of the Villain

So, The writing quality is good, understandable, and simple. There is a flow, though it is broken sometimes by the long sentences, overall it is good. Updates are stable... As someone who cares more about quality than quantity, this has what I need. The Character Design... the evolvement of characters in the story is good. Hope you are able to keep it up throughout the story. It's just the start so I am not going to comment more on it. Yes... the best part. The world... I wanna scream HELL YEAH! because the world is done so well... I would say it's fantastic. The dialogues are well made and the world between them is described well... I think this is the charm of the overall story... If you improve your writing quality a little and make the flow this world will be amazing IMO....