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Tbh wasnβt expecting much from this at the start but when I started I couldnβt stop. Great character and story development. Good structure and author knows how to use POVs . I like the idea of the mc going between worlds. Iβd like for the mc to get at least a decent amount of strength considering his love interest is a sannin and heβs not a beta And keep it to tsunade. If it Keeps the structure it has now and nothin ridiculous happens it could my favourite fanfic ππππ
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Okay, I haven't read it yet, but I'm going to give it 5 stars just because Waifu is Tsunade, author-san is definitely a fan of Naruto with good sense and is also a man of culture. I admit that I wouldnβt read it because I didnβt see the Harem teg, but I think sometimes itβs good to read a novel without Harem, especially if the heroine is Tsunade hahaha anyway, I have high expectations for this fanfic, I think I will not be disappointed.
the story is not bad just that the author does not know naruto and begins to put everything at random and makes it very confusing, the writing quality is not bad and but the protagonist looks like a fake character, the background of the world is not that great the author came up with the Greek gods who blessed him by giving him various powers and after obtaining them it seems that nothing has changed besides having a wife, so in my opinion the story is not much at first it was good but then it goes to make matters worse I saw from the comments that the author depends too much on what they write and this made the story worse, however it can be a nice pastime to read it
Amazing story and character development a full 5 star. Honestly one will look at the title and will not think much of the novel but let me tell you this, if you start reading you will not regret it my friend. Good luck to the author, I know your work life is catching up to you, but I hope you keep on writing and sharing us your story. Lots of love from another simple author. And happy new year.
Don't abandon this Sire! I'd like to read more of his childrens Adventure and new preggo Tsunade.. Come on pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls and Also what happen on SHinobi World(Boruto)..
It's really well done. At first it might feel and look like a typcal wish fullfilment fanfic. But thats where you are wrong kido. One of the best aspects with this novel is how both Zach(mc) and tsunade are old. Age is just not a number and they act and feel like they are as old as they are. They make mature decisions and some spur on the moment choices. The characters have flaws and they are not imidetsly op. They have all the tools to become OP but they dont start out op. So you can watch them grow. The grammar and word choice are both good and fits togheter with the characters. The story have a lot of potential. Im looking forward to reading more of it. + the romance between zach and tsunade is sweet as sugar.
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