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Хорошая глава, жду продолжения)

I like how the story develops. Usually when a main character becomes too powerful by age 3 (Jonin level or something) it's off-putting, but here it makes sense that he became a seal master at that age (and the desire, and the backstory, and the adult mind, everything leads to this). In other aspects of further development, the main thing is to try not to go too far. A kid who can beat up a kage seems funny. (But the choice of how to develop the story is yours, the author. I'm not asking you to change your story, that's just my opinion). Thanks for your hard work.

Спасибо за главу, жду продолжения) Думаю, что превратить часть армии в камень, не увидив даже части рыжих волос - это хороший способ деморализовать противника)

Спасибо за твой тяжёлый труд, автор! Замечательная история!

Мне нравится история, жду выхода новых глав!) Хотя любопытно кто будет любовные интересом главного героя и будет ли он вообще? [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

I don't think taking hogyeku is a good idea. Yes, it will give him a ton of power and ability, but he already has an incredibly strong foundation. By the time of the battle, Yhwach will be strong enough to at least not lose. If there is a hogyoku, then just like any other bleach story, the character will become too powerful for their universe. This situation can lead to the fact that the main character will not fight with opponents, but will simply show how much stronger he is than everyone else until the end of the plot. But this is just my opinion, it’s up to you, author, how to develop the story)

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Мне нравится, хороший сюжет, интересно посмотреть на взаимодействие персонажей. Главный герой не собирает девушек как покемонов. И не похоже что его единственная цель это стать самым сильным для того чтобы... Просто чтобы быть самым сильным. Он что-то создаёт, развивает свой пантентон, набирает людей, пока что не упирается своей крутость. Так что жду будущих взаимодействий с главными героями и его семьёй, а также реакции их реакции на всё это.

Thank you for your work, it is a pleasure to read this work. Looking forward to the next chapters. Hello to the author. Not 5 full stars because I don't want it to seem like the review was written by a bot)

Thanks for the chapter. I don’t know why, but it’s funny for me to imagine how the heroes will scare each other with threats of going to the “Field of Punishment” in the kingdom of Hades.

It is important to have a waifu for the main character) He seems a little lonely. I'm all for bleach.

Friend, write this story the way you see fit. Don't listen to the haters, I personally like everything. Chapters with construction, showdowns with the family and simple interactions between characters are a pleasure to read. It's nice to see that the main character is not just chasing power around the world, but is also engaged in other activities. I'm waiting for new chapters)

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The story is very interesting and easy to read, I look forward to each chapter. Author, keep up the good work![img=coins][img=recommend][img=coins]

the height of the totem is seven meters, is this the size of the house? Or scaling is lame?

I'm no expert, but didn't the arc reactor poison Tony because it saved him from shrapnel? Why does he keep using it?

Author! I have a question! You put "!" at the end of every sentence! Is there a reason for this?! I'm certainly not complaining! The plot is interesting! But! It's a little distracting! And knocks down the mood!

Great story, it's just a pity that it ended at the most interesting place. It remains only to wait for the author to return to this work in the future ...

It's always interesting to read good non-Konoha fanfiction. It's a shame it was abandoned, but it's still a good story. There is no nonsense about how the GG suddenly becomes a super scientist after death, versed in genetic engineering better than Orochimaru, there is no chasing tailed beasts, nor creating them, as if this is the solution to all the problems in the world, the GG does not go to put other people's eyes on himself in all holes just because they have cool abilities. This is a story about a guy with a not too moronic golden finger who gets out of all the trouble with his mind and plot armor that is not annoying when reading.