Son_of_the_Sun_God
“Flank em. Then Spank em” - Sun Tzu, The Art of War
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Son_of_the_Sun_God3dReplied to MrDegenerateWhy would the Author need to nerf the MC for the Riser Fight? It’s pretty clear that the MC is way more powerful and is only being given to Rias’s peerage as a loan. After the Fight, he becomes high class instantly.
Ch 74 That One Training Arc - 8detailBeyond Critical (Multi-Cross DxD, Rosario Vampire, Ikki Tousen, More)Anime & Comics · 0_Jordinio_0- Son_of_the_Sun_God10dReplied to CrimsonN7Ch 30 Quick question
- Son_of_the_Sun_God13dCommented
Tbh I was expecting more of an elvish sword? Ye know bc the whole theme of the mc and his family, is that their all elves.
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😂I absolutely pictured the God Emperor sitting on a coach eating popcorn ,completely fascinated by the Lobster Documentary in front of him
"Contrary to popular belief, lobsters feed exclusively on seafood. However, this does not prevent them from remaining very human..."] - Son_of_the_Sun_God14dCommented
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I prefer this form as opposed to the AI versions. A lot less exaggerated description and the story flows a bit better. It will also help with your writing skills as well. Anyway thanks for the chapter. Can’t wait to see what poison gu he comes up with.
Ch 8 **Chapter 8: Reward* - Son_of_the_Sun_God1mthReplied to DogmaticNonsense
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Once we did I brought them both back to Ossus and began explaining my life so far to them. Including my goals, the adventures I've been on, etc. - Son_of_the_Sun_God2mthCommented
I have to say that I’m liking this situation you’ve built with the Insanity god and Rom and how’s its them against the multiverse type thing. I don’t usually like the stories with multiple reincarnates and multiple gods bc it’s just really hard to juggle that many characters and strorylines. The way you have done it is actually really interesting. Anyway thx for the chapter
Ch 34 Rahvdal's Gift and Price. - Son_of_the_Sun_God2mthReplied to A_Real_Werewolf234
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He was her source of pride and her secret lover now. No one knew that second part, but Zekram looked away before speaking. - Son_of_the_Sun_God2mthCommented
I think this is a typo. Zekram is Venelena’s secret lover?
He was her source of pride and her secret lover now. No one knew that second part, but Zekram looked away before speaking. - Son_of_the_Sun_God2mthCommentedHowever, that idea didn't last long once the memory of Night Guy appeared in his mind.
- Son_of_the_Sun_God2mthReplied to trueidiocy_577Ch 559 Government Interference
- Son_of_the_Sun_God2mthCommented
??? Isn’t he Odin. Why does he need con bat experience. He’s like million of years old
I am currently 20 years of age. My training all these years has proven to be very fruitful. I have reached the level of master in the use of: the sword and greatsword, the spear, the Warhammer, the one-handed axe, the war axe, the bow and arrow as well as daggers of any kind. I still need real battle experience in a war, but that will come with time. My unarmed combat skills have sadly reached a plateau. Not because I am not getting better, I still am thanks to the Essence of the Blank, but I don't have anyone that knows some of these martial arts that I know of from the human soul. - Son_of_the_Sun_God2mthCommented
Decent chapters so far. 2 things I would mention would be his powerset and the pacing of the story. By giving him all those wishes you’ve given him quite a lot of abilities so just make sure to plan out how he uses those abilities and make sure to develop them properly. Show the readers how he does develop said abilities. As for pacing you’ve made your job a little harder by combining the plot lines of both dxd and PJ, so just make sure you have a little timeline written out to make sure you can combine both universes properly. Anyway good luck on your fic.
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