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It's really well done. At first it might feel and look like a typcal wish fullfilment fanfic. But thats where you are wrong kido. One of the best aspects with this novel is how both Zach(mc) and tsunade are old. Age is just not a number and they act and feel like they are as old as they are. They make mature decisions and some spur on the moment choices. The characters have flaws and they are not imidetsly op. They have all the tools to become OP but they dont start out op. So you can watch them grow. The grammar and word choice are both good and fits togheter with the characters. The story have a lot of potential. Im looking forward to reading more of it. + the romance between zach and tsunade is sweet as sugar.

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Yay_Pepto
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!!!! This is exactly what I'm going for! Thank you so much for the review and I hope I can keep up the standard and not dissapoint!

tommy_king
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What do u mean old? 50+ or walking stick old?

Yay_Pepto:!!!! This is exactly what I'm going for! Thank you so much for the review and I hope I can keep up the standard and not dissapoint!
Yay_Pepto
Yay_PeptoAuthorYay_Pepto

More seasoned and mature in personalities. Not chomping at the bit to change everything and willing to take a wait and see approach and timing their interactions.

tommy_king:What do u mean old? 50+ or walking stick old?