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The Alpha in Twilight: Kai Thornwood's Saga

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Kai Thornwood, a 20-year-old British fanfiction fanatic, wakes up in the last place he ever expected: the canon timeline of Twilight. Reborn as the older brother of Bella Swan, Kai has spent his life in Forks with their father, Charlie, living a quiet existence. But this isn’t the mundane Forks he read about. When Kai discovers he has supernatural abilities far beyond those of the Cullens or the Quileutes—abilities that mark him as a True Alpha—his arrival sends ripples through the timeline. Now, with the strength of a Van Helsing werewolf, the dominance of a True Alpha, and the ferocity of a monstrous wolf, Kai must navigate a world where vampires, werewolves, and humans all walk a fine line between coexistence and chaos. Between protecting Bella, flirting with fate, and trying to stay one step ahead of the Volturi, Kai’s presence changes everything. The Twilight Saga will never be the same—with humor, heart-pounding action, and unexpected romance, this is a new era in Forks.

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Chapter 1Chapter 1: The Alpha Awakens

Kai Thornwood woke to the sound of rain pattering against the windowpane. His head throbbed, his vision swimming. He knew something was off before he even opened his eyes. The bed beneath him was too hard, the air smelled too clean, and—hold up. Why could he smell so much? The rain on the asphalt, the mustiness of the walls, even the faint hint of coffee brewing somewhere distant.

He shot up, groaning as the room spun around him. He blinked to clear his vision, his jaw dropping as he took in his surroundings.

This wasn't his flat in Manchester.

This was… Forks, Washington.

The realization hit him like a freight train. Forks. Twilight. He knew this house from the books and movies. The cluttered living room. The fishing trophies. The sound of Charlie's cruiser pulling up outside.

"What the bloody hell…"

Kai stumbled to the mirror hanging on the wall and froze. Gone was his lanky, British self. In his place was a broad-shouldered, athletic young man with piercing green eyes and a wild mop of dark hair. He looked older—stronger.

And then it hit him.

"Oi, no way," he muttered, clutching his head. "I'm Kai Thornwood. Bella's bloody brother?"

The front door opened, and Kai spun around as Charlie Swan stepped inside, dripping from the rain. He tossed his hat on the rack and glanced at Kai.

"You alright, son? You look like you've seen a ghost."

Kai blinked, scrambling for an answer. "Yeah, Dad. Just… uh, headache. I'll be fine."

Charlie gave him a gruff nod before disappearing into the kitchen. Kai's heart pounded. This wasn't just a dream. He'd been reborn here. And judging by the timeline, Bella wasn't here yet.

That gave him time to figure things out.

And figure it out he did. Over the next few weeks, Kai discovered his new abilities. Enhanced strength, speed, senses—and a primal power that bubbled just beneath his skin. He had dreams of red eyes, howls in the night, and a fiery glow in his chest.

One night, while exploring the woods, the truth revealed itself. He shifted. His body contorted, his muscles expanded, and fur sprouted across his skin. But it wasn't just any werewolf form. This was pure power—an alpha's form.

A True Alpha.

"Bloody hell," Kai muttered, flexing his claws as he admired his reflection in a nearby stream. "Looks like I'm the big dog now."

But with great power came great responsibility—or in Kai's case, a whole lot of chaos.

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Doonie_DevourerLv14

ok first off i love twilight so that's a plus for this book. the problems aren't a lot but are also major problem 1: pacing- the pacing is way too fast the time skips makes the story go from a diamond to trash like I'm reading one chapter i start the next and we are confused bc you skipped so much we gotta fill everything in ourselves problem 2: detail- your story lacks detail and I'm not saying there is none but you didn't add detail for the would/background the character himself or even detailing what we missed in them awful time skips like building the would and interactions through detail in face emotion environment are a big part in writing a story. problem 3: dialogue- this kinda goes with problem 2 but another thing that needs to be worked on is dialogue. there isn't a lot of good dialogue for example when Kai says "lets just say it's complicated...". this could be changed to make the Convo flow way better to actually show that he doesn't want to tell them his powers like the first time would be fine but after that is just boring and repetitive imo. he could easily be like I don't think that's your business if hes that laid back don't want to be involved and protecting his sister or he could straight up say leave me alone lol. anyway if you are able to fix those in the upcoming chapters this story will be honestly amazing if you right longer chaps to get all that stuff in and slow down on the updates so you actually have time to get a good chapter out it would benefit you more bc you have more time to think plan and seriously build the would and it's characters plus the the character development for the mc. you can slow down the story so you have more time to plan obviously this isn't a lot of time for slowing down but it would help. thanks for writing the novel 🙏🏿

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