Jayjayempi

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Definitivamente uno de los mejores que he leido, llevo tiempo queriendo leer un fanfic de HP con esta tematica, este es el unico que he encontrado con un personaje coherente y con una historia que no es absurda! definitivamente lo recomiendo

Muy bien escrito y francamente hermoso, no creo que este planeado para un fanfic largo (aunque los capitulos son bastante extensos) pero definitivamente es algo agradable de leer, desentona mucho con los fanfics que uno lee en esta plataforma, ignoren los comentarios negativos y las reseñas, esto definitivamente es escritura de calidad.

Dude, don't waste your time responding to hate. Some people will dislike it, and some will love it; they'll always find something to complain about. Your characters are fine; they don't feel one-dimensional. Like normal people, they can change their perspectives. In your story, time passes, so it's normal for the characters to change their mindset. Just ignore it and keep up the good work. (Seriously, don't read the comments so much and delete anything that discourages you.)

By far the best DBZ fanfic I didn't know I needed. Usually when you read a fanfic you find yourself saying things like: this part is incoherent, or I would have made the story different here, but in this fanfic there's none of that. The characters feel alive; it's not a Gary Stu who suddenly becomes a monster on the level of Frieza. I really congratulate the author because I had forgotten what it's like to feel excited for the next chapter.

me recuerda un poco a los protas Chūnibyō , si se siente un poco extraño, no es malo en si, solo que todo eso del kimono, la pipa y el gato se siente como si hubieran anotado una lista de cosas "geniales" y lo hubieran puesto al prota, pero la narrativa en general esta muy bien hecha, al menos solo los recientes capitulo se sienten raros

habia olvidado la tranformacion ozaru!, esto esta increible, los fics de dbz por lo general son malos, esto es genial, sigue asi!

esto esta muy bien escrito, primera vez que leo un fanfic de dbz tan coherente y detallado, la linea de tiempo me sacude un poco por que no se cuantos años le llevara Cress a Goku, pero este es un excelente trabajo, espero que lo termines!

I enjoyed my vacation, we're back to posting!

I tried to justify this with a few things: 1. Nate's gift is VERY well-suited for battle; in close combat, his movements are perfect. 2. In this canon, the werewolves haven't faced any vampires (if you take note, Laurent is still alive, and the werewolves have only made contact with the Cullens), so they lack experience, and Nate is made for fighting. It was a bad combination. Oh, and just to clarify, I agree with you, but Nate isn't invincible. Objectively speaking, in a 1v1 against someone with a ranged gift (Jane, for example), he wouldn't stand much of a chance without using some trick.