Reviews of Teen Wolf The Argent
Teen Wolf The Argent
Boxer_Vivek
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So deleted my last review, it's just hard typing on mobile, so much easier with an actual keyboard. Well there aren't many ****wolf fanfiction out there and 90% of those i found were slash/ BL (nothing wrong with being gay, its just not my genre). The Story so far is nice, mc is op but he doesn't have a bazzilion abilitys aka cluster****, story isnt rushed either. I'm really looking forward how this plays out and for the love of everything thats holy, don't drop it.
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Another boring character, addressing bland jokes to a divine entity. Superficial characters, the protagonist asked to reincarnate in **** wolf with a sayajin body and the entity began to sweat at the thought, hahaha she is thousands of years old and has certainly interviewed many people, as it would be possible she never had such a case ?! (The protagonist doesn't have anything special, so it's easy to believe that the entity just went out picking up random people to transport to another world. Obviously she's already interviewed many.) Reasonable grammar, kind of vocabulary ... bad. Terrible chapter size. I only read until chapter 2 and didn't even finish the chapter, I didn't want to risk my sanity. Outro personagem chato, dirigindo piadinhas sem graça a uma entidade divina. Personagens superficiais, o protagonista pediu para reencarnar em teen wolf com um corpo sayajin e a entidade começou a suar com o pensamento, hahaha ela tem milhares de anos e com certeza já entrevistou muitas pessoas, como seria possível ela nunca ter passado por um caso desses?! (O protagonista não tem algo especial, então é fácil acreditar que a entidade só saí pegando pessoas aleatórias para transportar para outro mundo. Obviamente ela já entrevistou muitos.) Gramática razoável, vocabulário meio... ruim. Tamanho dos capítulos péssimo. Li somente até o capítulo 2 e nem mesmo terminei o capítulo, não quis arriscar minha sanidade.
The plot is too forced,like really 36 chapters,ultra slow paced release,and you force the plot with the wishes.Just get it going.Also why not finish the **** wolf plot,then mix it between originals,twilight,like have Volturi come for mc and his alpha friends,and he is forced to gather allies,to finally kill volturi.
Great novel so far, keep up the good work, I know it can be tiring to recheck what you wrote to make sure it flows properly but it might help those of use who nitpick :P Saying that though it's great for the majority with only a few grammar problems which don't really affect the story flow at all. So like I said keep up the great work, I'll definitely be with this one until you decide to end it.
This is my little piece of heaven everyday. The character design is accurate and the bits of pieces of differences because of the changes in the timeline are awesome. If I had any problems in this novel, it would be because first, I'd be great if Allison was not his sister because I like the actress but in the contrast the hunter background is great and very reasonable. And last is because there is no character visuals to Selena. It'd be great if you could say things like Selena looks like Alexandra Daddario or something. Thanks and keep up the good work!