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HadesChampion
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This is a fantastic novel. It has a great world, mc is cool and not super op. Touches on Hp world but that's up to the end, unsure if author is continuing but I really hope so as it has huge potential.

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Teen Wolf The Argent

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HadesChampion
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Hey author. I know its **** wolf and all but it's getting kinda slow on that end , I'd recommend ending **** wolf soon and not drag too much and continue to Hp world with his family . It's really cool with the whole being a teacher , it's interesting. Like he is 18 right. An option could be on the goblet of fire year if your looking to add any girl into his relationship like a small harem I'd recommend adding fleur as she will be like 17 I think that year so the age is good. If you could spin it so Selena gets less possessive and let's him get another girl . I just think you have been neglecting her a little like he has a huge willpower to keep her safe but he hardly ever spent time with her. Just some options if your getting writers block or anything . Teen wolf has kinda outlived its use and making up your own original story for it to continue wont really fit into a fanfiction as. You at least have 3-5 years in Harry Potter story you can work on. Idk man but whatever you choose I'm cold with, just some food for thought