Great novel so far, keep up the good work, I know it can be tiring to recheck what you wrote to make sure it flows properly but it might help those of use who nitpick :P Saying that though it's great for the majority with only a few grammar problems which don't really affect the story flow at all. So like I said keep up the great work, I'll definitely be with this one until you decide to end it.
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