One of the Books i looked forward to every day, exactly at 1:30am and 2:30pm, I would even take toliet breaks at work so I could read the updated chapters. Sad to see it go just like all my other novels but overall I’ve had a very enjoyable experIence.

Sad to see it go this way but was overall a very enjoyable read. This was one of those books that I couldn’t wait to update daily, even though the plot was common.

My review 4 chapter in, Synopsis: The synopisis is what I believe a good synopisis should be or pretty close to, it sums up his backstory in a clear an concise manner and then uses 2 phrases i found really enthralling. “A plan that would enchant the most common of men…” and “But we all know that there is no such thing as a free lunch”. Especially so for the first phrase as it really intertwines with ‘Encato’ 9/10 Concept: Whilst the concept of transmigration and being given powers by a ROB is overused a bit and cliche, the world he is being sent to and the author’s own additions is unique and novel. 6/10 Pacing: The pacing within just 4 chapters is fast but you can’t expect much from a fan-fic of a disney movie. I wouldn’t expect this be a long novel just based on the current pacing in addition to the world he’s transmigrated to. 4/10 Grammar: There is grammatical mistakes Just like every other novel on this site, but I’d say its a step above other novels especially in comparison to fan-fics where the author’s first language isn’t English. Though the style of writing is quite awkard and stiff but not anything significant. 8/10 World building: Can’t speak much from a world building perspective but there was little to none world building and character explanation in the prior world. and as world building is somewhat tied to the pacing of a novel I do have to make my own assumptions but the pros of doing fan-fics is that the world building part of it is basically partially completed anyways. 5/10 Overall: I have expectations for this novel to do well for a fan-fic, and enjoyed the little bit of romance we the readers have been exposed to so far, hopefully the mc doesnt turn into those brain dead brutes who can only think with their lower half. 6.4/10 so far. ~KinglyBeast

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HIgh expectations for this novel so far, the first 40 chapters have Appealed to my sense of reading very much, and i cant help wanting more. Cant wait till it updates more.