OrzDemonic
This is my first review. OK where do I start from...... hmmmm. Alright, first the editing quality of this novel is crap. Like seriously crappy. It kills the flow of the book I can barely read one paragraph without having to either take a break or roll my eyes. It's that bad. I mean if it's a middle schooled who is writing this then it's understandable. I'm already complaining so much but I'm just on the third chapter at this point. I like the the fact that a whole new type of system is introduced here. I mean a system that gives you quests based on your original occupation is not something I've seen before. Most systems just force you to do stuff. Well if you've seen similar systems to this just outside name of the novel under replies. That aside, I find the system really childish and cringy. There is barely any world background and the plot just seems forced. Well this is just my opinion after reading three chapters. Hopefully it gets better. The update frequent is probably one of the few good points about this novel though.
Finally, I managed to found a worthwhile farming novel to read. Love the HM reference for the chickens. Put a smile on my face. Keep up the good work. Just a note and you may already know this. The official successor to Bokujo Monogatari is Story of Seasons. The HM Lights of Hope is no longer bokujo. SoS may be another outlet of inspiration for you.
I enjoy the story for what it is. It's not the best spelling and sentence structure but the Author is not a native English speaker so it's forgiven that the language is substandard. I enjoy that the story is more laid back and that overall it's more enjoyable and I bet after some time the grammar and structure will improve after all practice makes perfect. I recommend this to people who can understand what the author is trying to convey and maybe help out with positive comments and tips.
I have read this novel multiple times and i can say that i liked it but author needs to find an editor cos this abuse of s in words need to stop, at least use google translate if you are not sure how to translate the sentence. Personally i like the humor that is shown in novel and is a relaxing reed for me. But now it seams that author is gone on hiatus since there is no new chapters for 4 months now, hope they come back as soon as possible.
I thought its gonna be one of those novels with same pattern but Its not. This novel goes so far to give an in depth look about the system. System thats is not inorganic A.I. like the other novels. This novel provides much more detail and explains the connection of different people from "far away" places.
This is the second novel on my library ever since I got to know this website. After reading this for 22 chapters, this novel is really about the MC, his farm, and his interaction with other peoples. What I've seen so far is that the author intends to make this story slow paced, which is fit to my taste, and the story itself is lighthearted. I'm enjoying the interaction between MC and other peoples, sometimes it makes me smile, and sometimes it makes me cringes. Since this novel is Slice of Life genre, the author needs to work more on the world building. For the author's first story, I've enjoyed the ride so far.