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Anne_Akamz
Anne_AkamzLv145yrAnne_Akamz

This is my first review. OK where do I start from...... hmmmm. Alright, first the editing quality of this novel is crap. Like seriously crappy. It kills the flow of the book I can barely read one paragraph without having to either take a break or roll my eyes. It's that bad. I mean if it's a middle schooled who is writing this then it's understandable. I'm already complaining so much but I'm just on the third chapter at this point. I like the the fact that a whole new type of system is introduced here. I mean a system that gives you quests based on your original occupation is not something I've seen before. Most systems just force you to do stuff. Well if you've seen similar systems to this just outside name of the novel under replies. That aside, I find the system really childish and cringy. There is barely any world background and the plot just seems forced. Well this is just my opinion after reading three chapters. Hopefully it gets better. The update frequent is probably one of the few good points about this novel though.

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Song Tian's Farm and His Daily Life

OrzDemonic

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OrzDemonic
OrzDemonicAuthorOrzDemonic

Hello, thanks for the review. This is the one i'm looking for, thank you for pointing out the flaw on my writing so i can improve myself.

Anne_Akamz
Anne_AkamzLv14Anne_Akamz

Welcome. Is English your first language?

OrzDemonic:Hello, thanks for the review. This is the one i'm looking for, thank you for pointing out the flaw on my writing so i can improve myself.
Anne_Akamz
Anne_AkamzLv14Anne_Akamz

*schooler

OrzDemonic
OrzDemonicAuthorOrzDemonic

No, it's not my native language lol

Anne_Akamz:Welcome. Is English your first language?
Anne_Akamz
Anne_AkamzLv14Anne_Akamz

Oh that makes a lot of sense now. It would be good if you can find an editor

OrzDemonic:No, it's not my native language lol