I enjoy the story for what it is. It's not the best spelling and sentence structure but the Author is not a native English speaker so it's forgiven that the language is substandard. I enjoy that the story is more laid back and that overall it's more enjoyable and I bet after some time the grammar and structure will improve after all practice makes perfect. I recommend this to people who can understand what the author is trying to convey and maybe help out with positive comments and tips.
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