Reviews of Reincarnated with 3 Gifts (Dropped)

I thought it was something original and interesting. But it turned out that this is another Naruto fanfic in the Mha world. Chakra in the MHA world looks ridiculous and is too out of balance. He already has a Saiyan pedigree, observation Haki and a strong quirk.

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What ? I write this Fan-fic, Of course I like everything about this Fan-fiction. I made this for fun so I don't think you would like this FF.

I dropped this novel had many potentials but you spoiled it. You could have used these abilities and made him a super warrior, but you shouldn't have brought this special nonsense chakra from Naruto without justification.

everything i want to said already said by Ammar_Anwar review, this story barely okay to read at least for my standard and if you don't have novel/webnovel/fanfic to read just try it this fanfic.

Well, first of all the energies and the diferent 'powers'(ninjutsu) just appear without reason or motive, the history is just a dumb kid without knowing what to do with his life, no development of character or the history itself, to little info about how he create his abilities related to chakra, no backgroung knowledge of the mc, his parents died being heroes, he lives alone and there is no explanation about it, weird fabfiction that follow the history from the manga or anime without any change.

It just sucks... The grammar makes it difficult you read as it feels super slow to get through such poor grammar. The OC sucks there is no originality to him he has no reason to be a hero he literally has nothing to make me want to read about him

однозначно мусорный фанфик! Очень расстроился после первых же глав. Ситуация с богом более менее нормальная. Подарки тоже логичные. Ки и психическая сила тоже укладываются в подарки... но потом автор пошел во все тяжкие. Чакра... ПРИДУМЫВАНИЕ ниндзютсу. Он придумал технику запечатывания... я не выдержал. Я бы понял из подарков следует Ки как в драгон боле. Тренировки тела с причудой контроля веса позволят родословной саяна процветать. Но возможность создать чакру была ЛИШНЕЙ. ВСЕ. Прочел 6 глав и бросаю это. Либо пишите более серьезно либо не пишите вообще. Планирования нет... бросаются сцены. Пропускается время и укорачиваются события. Противно читать.

The english is terrible. The Author forgets letters and cant make complete sentences. The Mc’s laugh is like “MUHAHAHAHA.” Author needs to at least learn how to make sentences flow together and make proper sentences. The more complex grammatical errors can be over looked (Examples: “random sentence” / Therefore, I wish you good luck / Dog’s) blah blah blah you get it.

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Decent Enough storyline but i think you should re write the ninja stuff out keep the Ki theres really no link there and it seemed you Were reaching so u could have cool ninja powers. I also think you should go back through and do another read through A lot of the sentances are confusing making it a hard read otherwise awesome

I haven't read the book àaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhjjjj can't believe I need 140 characters ahhhhhhhhhhhh

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It's good keep it up!!!!!