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When is going to finish the thing with Umbridge? I remember Harry telling Quinn something about 2 weeks of evidence, and now in the chapter a couple of weeks have passed and there is not development for the problem? Also is getting boring to read this arc, anyways i have been reading this for a long time hopefully this will improve.
What a stupid and forced situation
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Sigh, i would like to think that some people are naive and are not smart enough to see some clear hints that points that something is wrong, but he a 18 years old person who watched BNHA before, should be aware of how Bad the situation inside that world in terms of quirks. But he just doesnt worry about it and now is being tortured for it, is just plain weird for me, because i think that nobody is that Dumb or naive to be so unprepared on those situations. Well grammar has a lot of problems, like the he/she problems, large paragraphs among others
Sigh, the best option from my point of view will be to talk about how the whole desrruction of the clan was weird and develop the situation from that point, like sasuke is a child and all related to his clan isof big importance to him, so having some kind of close relation with him, will be beneficial to mc
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Sigh... The idea of the story was good but, there are many situations that could have been made better, also the mc is just weird, he doesnt even try to improve himself and just waste time, an example, he says that he wants money to mantain the harem, but he is just being average with his life while he could be trying to think ideas which could help him in the future.
Dont worry to much dude, i will be waiting for more chapters