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Review Detail of L_Arc in Reincarnated with 3 Gifts (Dropped)

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L_Arc
L_ArcLv13yrL_Arc

Let's do this one by one. Proper Review. -Writing Quality: 4 The writing is decent. The paragraphs are not clustered and novel is readable. There are a few silly spelling mistakes but they can be ignored. All in all, it is a webnovel that you can read and understand. -Stability of Updates: 4 There are only 15 chapters at the time of this review. Chapters are consistently released till now. 15 chapters in 15 days, -Story Development: 1 -Character Design: 1 There is no deviation from cannon up to this point. The characters have also been dumbed down. The original premise of the story was as baffling as all the others. Guy dies due to getting hit by a truck. Meets some R.O.B and gets 3 wishes. Now you may wonder how someone can ruin this. The character has nothing. The character is literally a blank. Reading about it made me so lost. He thought of nothing. No thoughts concerning any regrets from earth. No thoughts to family and friends. No goals whatsoever. He just decided to roll with it for no reason whatsoever. No reason to become strong. -Character Design: 0 In regards to his power. This is a blatant wish-fulfillment. He creates ninjutsu, bloodline limits and senzu beans out of nowhere. There has been no hint or foreshadowing of a strong enemy. The R.O.B has been shown to be OOC. He behaved more like a child on a sugar rush than some Omnipotent being. The only thing spoken about is the transfer to the marvel universe if his life is too boring. Which it is. The character is doing nothing other than training and following the plot. All Might apparently forgot him while saving the other students... right. Right. -World Background: 3 There has been no expansion. You literally cannot read this if you do not watch or read MHA. The characters have been dumbed down. He apparently lives alone. Not elaborated whatsoever after that. Does his parents being heroes allow him that privilege? We simply do not know. - - - I will be dropping this now. Thank you Mr. Author for sharing this but something like this isn't for me. I am sure there are others who will appreciate this. Have a good day.

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Reincarnated with 3 Gifts (Dropped)

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Izanmi
IzanmiLv3Izanmi

I agree with your analysis. He started adding other energies that came out of nowhere. I don't understand what's wrong with making a MC that only fights with his fists instead of jutsus or laser beams. (Google translate)

95_novel_maniac_95
95_novel_maniac_95Lv595_novel_maniac_95

I know right I mean weight control (toned down gravity manipulation)+sayain bloodline+observation haki...is bonafide top-notch close combat combo......but why ninjutsu.... even if he made chakra without any knowledge doing jutsu??? if it was 8-gates it may still be acceptable with SS transformation .......... but fujutsu..... well anyway thanks author, keep up the good work for readers 👍👍👍👍 peace out ....

Izanmi:I agree with your analysis. He started adding other energies that came out of nowhere. I don't understand what's wrong with making a MC that only fights with his fists instead of jutsus or laser beams. (Google translate)
eclairsshi
eclairsshiLv4eclairsshi

Your point in WQ is too high. Though the writing is bearable, not decent cause of the many grammar and spelling mistakes, the perspective keeps jumping from 3rd person narative to first without any indication. It would be appropriate to give it a 3

L_Arc
L_ArcLv1L_Arc

I understand that but I only rate stuff according to the average standard of web novel. Most of the fan fiction section is filled with garbage quality stuff. In comparison to that, it is alright. I even mentioned that exact thing. ‘All in all, it is a novel you can read.’

eclairsshi:Your point in WQ is too high. Though the writing is bearable, not decent cause of the many grammar and spelling mistakes, the perspective keeps jumping from 3rd person narative to first without any indication. It would be appropriate to give it a 3