scrtsquirrely2
always read the fan fics figured id throw my hat into the ring even if i have horrible grammar
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gathering event this* evening
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feel free to keep proof reading and call out any other mistakes you find i re read most my chapters but because i wrote it alot of the time my mind just inserts whats supposed to be there not what is
thanks for bringing it to my attention ill fix
Decent Enough storyline but i think you should re write the ninja stuff out keep the Ki theres really no link there and it seemed you Were reaching so u could have cool ninja powers. I also think you should go back through and do another read through A lot of the sentances are confusing making it a hard read otherwise awesome