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Feed me all the good books please

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  • Legacy_24
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    Oh the life of a genius ‘ Dont worry May if i dont get into MIT Harvord is an easy back up’…

    Me:So i need to get the highest grade possible to get in the college. Don't worry Aunt May. I will get into MIT. If I don't I will just go to Harvard. Don't worry about me aunt May I'm going to ace this.
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    Marvel: Reborn
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  • Legacy_24
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    Much much better chapter the story flowed and the text wasnt clunky thank you author

    Ch 6 Chapter 6: A visit to the Diagon Alley.
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    HP: Rise of the House Malfoy.
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  • Legacy_24
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    Simplify the text dude i loved your hufflepuff champion book and a big part of that was the story flowed this one hurts my brain to read

    But, if there are some editing mistakes or conceptual mistakes, please point them out.
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    HP: Rise of the House Malfoy.
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  • Legacy_24
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    1 paragraph yet bloodline is used 4 times… it seems clunky and hard to read is this a translation or original fan fic?

    This is not to mention. At that time, the bloodline of the pure-blood family was very pure, and the bloodline also carried the mysterious power that was the origin of magic. In order to ensure the inheritance of the bloodline power, it was necessary to rely on the intermarriage of close relatives to ensure the purity of the bloodline.
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    HP: Rise of the House Malfoy.
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  • Legacy_24
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    Cant wait your a great writer and i find the naruto neglect fan fics with the most potential but most disappointing ive read there was 2 ever i loved and I mean freaking loved and unfortunately the author stopped posting

    Ch 23 I have decided to write a new fanfic
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    Naruto: The Curse Of Prophecy
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  • Legacy_24
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    Hey Mr Author when does harry start showing hes far beyond everyone. I get Hermione is a genius and shes my fav pairing in Hp fan fics but its kind of frustrating its all just praising her and the fact he is on par with Ron Academically is hurting my sould. I Get the laying low thing but this is beyond that at this point. Im enjoying your book and have no hate just struggling to identify with such a low key Harry. Even if he just did well in practicals you would think hes better known for his talent at this point as all the teachers would see he was outstanding at practical magic

    Ch 51 First Defence Class of the Year
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    Harry Potter and the true wizarding world
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  • Legacy_24
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    Your kidding why the heck would you drop such an amazing story

    Ch 34 I am dropping this!!!!
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    Hufflepuff's Champion.
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  • Legacy_24
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    10/10 i get the romance wasnt the best but this story is incredible and i look forward to the next chapter everyday

    First of all, let me know in the comments how have you been liking this webnovel.
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  • Legacy_24
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    This story is phenomenal thank you for all your hard work

    Ch 17 Chapter 17:
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    Hufflepuff's Champion.
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  • Legacy_24
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    Anyone have any idea how many times dilly dally has been used in this novel? I have no issue with it of course I am just curious how much its been used

    Zachary didn't dare dilly dally. He immediately put a full stop to his stretching routine, then chugged down some water before rushing towards the fitness coach on the sidelines.
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    THE GREATEST OF ALL TIME
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  • Legacy_24
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    +1

    1. Y
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    Teen Wolf :- A Wolf's Journey.
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  • Legacy_24
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    +1

    (2) Or This One
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    The True Might of Senju
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  • Legacy_24
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    Love all the characters but chloe is best girl

    The warmth in her body continue to grow when they started to kiss and she felt very safe in his embrace even though she had sworn off men ever since the incident with the knight. One of the reasons she liked younger boys was because they were still innocent and it felt like she had control over the situation. Remembering how an older man had looked down on her like she was a possession in the past, Chloe had been making an effort to avoid them for the last eight years. Now, being held by Vahn, most of her fears felt like they were slowly draining away. When she saw his expression change and heard his words of gratitude, the warmth in her chest felt like it was beginning to melt her heart as she looked into his eyes and said, "Vahn, I think I might love you..."
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  • Legacy_24
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    +1

    1. Y
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    Teen Wolf :- A Wolf's Journey.
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  • Legacy_24
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    Dang it totally want laura over magik or rogue but ita your story and like i said i love it its just wishful thinking for me no hate

    "I just don't like her. She is too flirtatious and unreliable. She is also lazy yet wanted to be the squad leader. Worst of all, she has designs on you."
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  • Legacy_24
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    Ok this is not a complaint and i love every bit of your story but i fricking adore laura and even though jack is an adult because of limbo they are basically the same age any chance for laura to have a place in harem. Her character in this is so well done and i can see your having him as a role model for her but monet has had no presence so I really want laura to replace her

    "I just don't like her. She is too flirtatious and unreliable. She is also lazy yet wanted to be the squad leader. Worst of all, she has designs on you."
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  • Legacy_24
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    Your the heir of merlin act like it pleaee

    The next lesson of the day was Transfiguration with McGonagall. She showed interest last time in me due to my independent attitude so I hoped she didn't single me out too much. If she did though I could probably use it as a shield to fake my abilities, acting dumb to points if she expects too much…
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    Harry Potter and The Descendant of Merlin
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  • Legacy_24
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    Stop just stop gosh darn it nobody wants beta fake dumb mc

    The next lesson of the day was Transfiguration with McGonagall. She showed interest last time in me due to my independent attitude so I hoped she didn't single me out too much. If she did though I could probably use it as a shield to fake my abilities, acting dumb to points if she expects too much…
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    Harry Potter and The Descendant of Merlin
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  • Legacy_24
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    Grindlewad makes voldy look like a lil female dog

    Even after all the mistakes that Dumbledore made Harry still can't help but feel for the Headmaster. Yes, Albus lied to him and kept things from him, but what was Dumbledore supposed to do, tell an eleven year that the strongest dark wizard this world has ever seen is hell-bent on killing him and he only survived the first time was because of his mother's sacrificial ritual.
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    HP: A New Life
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  • Legacy_24
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    This story is so god dang good

    Ch 10 Chapter 9
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    Desert Prince
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