Mario_Walker
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
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What? Apophis is one of the strongest figure in Egyptian mythology that embodies chaos, He is the enemy of Sun God Ra which is one of the most powerful figure in the Egyptian pantheon. and he doesnt eat the mythical zoan Apophis fruit? like there is nothing more stupid then that like how stupid can you be to keep that fruit saved up for a trashy crewmate anyway if you dont like stupid mc and such then dont read this cuz in my book that counts as stupid
There are so many bads things about this fanfic I dont know where to start. First of all the author is a d##k lets get that put of the way, (not sure if this is translated but it doesnt matter). Second of all, the MC has a system but for some dumba## reason, Observation haki is more expensive than a GOD##N MYTHICAL ZOAN FRUIT. That is some of the biggest bs I have ever seen. Third of all, the MC gets the strongest mythical zoan fruit which is basically a serpent god that causes earthquakes and can eat the earth BUT he says he wants to give it to a crewmate๐ He is basically giving the power of a god to his crewmate while he is a puny little s##t. Fourth of all, the MC is actual s#um, he kills innocents and people for no reason, and he was just supposed to be your average Joe but nah out of nowhere this average guy kills people left and right including innocent villages without remorse....One of the worse fics I have ever read.
ok so the mc is stupid he doesnt eat the apophis fruit also i decided to add another review cuz i just noticed theres like 20 or 25 reviews of the same acc so seems like author or someone else is using alts to make 5 star reviews either the author deletes em or ill get my homies to spam 1 star reviews in return i dont like authors who keep fake reviews to make their rating look good
Trash. Novel with No Brain MC. He want to give a powerful devil fruit instead of using himself as he had a chance to use 2 devil fruits. Just to prove MC power, Author massacre a branch with hundreds of Marnie over a little argument of 'why is he using pirate flag'. I mean he should have hosted the flag after going into sea and avoid a needless conflict. Author says that MC in his previous life he was anti-social. If you ask me, Mc is borderline psychopath who kills for little arguments.
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Writing quality 1 zero if it werenโt bearable Updates okay i guess Story development okay i guessed bot too fast oafed and bot too slow Character design kinda sucks But still bearable World background its okay but it sucks the same time like i dont know how to explain it over all it sucks and Oaky at the same time
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