I'm number 3 great chapter

Amazing I have to say you have put together a very good book can't wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work it's not easy But You Have To Do It For The Emperor

amazing fanfic i just hope it's not dropped like all the other good ones

great story so far keep up the good work

you should have him save the Senju clan from being wiped out in the ninja wars so that the clan will still be around with the 4th Hokage

so far it's a nice story but not really sure about the update schedule. the way you write could be better. you could do better with the inner monologue and the pov switches. some of the inner monologues are sometimes just redundant but if done better could make it sound better. the main character has a nice development so far from what I read with the availability chapters but could have had more details. so far it's a very impressive story that could actually go somewhere if done right and if not dropped. hopefully, this story lasts

great job very nice marvel fanfic

rogue

ignore this

this guy is so weak the next chapter could be the final chapter he doesn't increase his strength he just has *** all day great train for fighting chicks

he needs his own country like doom has

is he going to make the sentry serum that would be some power

Momo Yaoyorozu

where did Natasha come from that was weird

you need Grammarly for your chapters it will help fix errors in your chapters

Emma frost

best one piece fanfic on this site great job

a great chapter can he take peoples intelligence to become a super genius or did i miss that part

Who complained about him being OP what a bunch of weirdos they don't know what OP is in the marvel universe this must be the first fanfic they have read in there life

the grammar is too bad I can't read this anymore i tried it's not working out for this fanfic better luck on your next fanfic