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Reborn in the Shinobi World as a Sarutobi

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Mc is reincarnated on Naruto has a member of the Sarutobi clan world with some perks. The picture fan art belongs to Green Tea. was the only most handsome Asuma when searching for pictures for this fanfic light novel. This is a Fanfiction and I don't own any of the characters from Naruto except for the Mc and others I may add.

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Pole please comment I would like to get involved with my readers to see where I can take this story. I am no expert on Naruto story but i know at least the main story line. I'll like to share ideas with you guys. So please do comment on the latest chapters.
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umm first of all the grammar is just bad i cant read it past ch3 even if im curious about your story... sorry there... hopefully you can use gramerly or other grammar checker before you post it here or update it later on.. please... because i think the premise for this story is good please tell me if it become better and what ch it start from?
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This story has promise but it has a ton of stuff that irritates me. First of all the vocabulary of some of the characters doesn't make sense. The Hokage is using the word totally in his vocabulary as if he is an ignorant high schooler rather than a highly learned leader of a village that is nicknamed "The Professor". I love Op Mc's which this mc is but I hate Mc's who think that they can take other characters and make them Op just because he trained them. That's not how it works. The mc has cheats that give him a huge advantage so it makes sense his speed of advancement but at age 6 all his friends can beat chuunin and have mid chuunin level chakra is ridiculous. The author also doesn't really realize how chakra intensive some techniques are. 7-8 years old can not use A or even B rank Jutsu. Kage bunshin no jutsu is restricted to jonin level ninjas because of many reasons. One is that an average jonin with a jonin level chakra and control can only use it to make 3-4 Kage bunshins and that's it. An 8-year-old kid with a chuunin level chakra and control can summon 7-8 Kage bunshins to do his moonlight style Kenjutsu. Another thing that annoys me is that the author confuses kenjutsu with taijutsu and it irritates me a lot. There are other things that irritate me but I don't want to write more.
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IntactReincarnator
IntactReincarnatorAuthorIntactReincarnator

Pole please comment I would like to get involved with my readers to see where I can take this story. I am no expert on Naruto story but i know at least the main story line. I'll like to share ideas with you guys. So please do comment on the latest chapters.

KnightShade420
KnightShade420Lv6KnightShade420

This story has promise but it has a ton of stuff that irritates me. First of all the vocabulary of some of the characters doesn't make sense. The Hokage is using the word totally in his vocabulary as if he is an ignorant high schooler rather than a highly learned leader of a village that is nicknamed "The Professor". I love Op Mc's which this mc is but I hate Mc's who think that they can take other characters and make them Op just because he trained them. That's not how it works. The mc has cheats that give him a huge advantage so it makes sense his speed of advancement but at age 6 all his friends can beat chuunin and have mid chuunin level chakra is ridiculous. The author also doesn't really realize how chakra intensive some techniques are. 7-8 years old can not use A or even B rank Jutsu. Kage bunshin no jutsu is restricted to jonin level ninjas because of many reasons. One is that an average jonin with a jonin level chakra and control can only use it to make 3-4 Kage bunshins and that's it. An 8-year-old kid with a chuunin level chakra and control can summon 7-8 Kage bunshins to do his moonlight style Kenjutsu. Another thing that annoys me is that the author confuses kenjutsu with taijutsu and it irritates me a lot. There are other things that irritate me but I don't want to write more.

Ryxvert
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umm first of all the grammar is just bad i cant read it past ch3 even if im curious about your story... sorry there... hopefully you can use gramerly or other grammar checker before you post it here or update it later on.. please... because i think the premise for this story is good please tell me if it become better and what ch it start from?

AnimeJunky
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awesome I love it please post more chapters.🙏hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhj qjnckwc wokdjc cojwknckjmw ckmc owejkc kweojcmowe o

IntactReincarnator
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Looks like a promising beginning...... Just wondering where the future may take it. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

FanFicManiac69
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this really good I love it😁

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ARN3wman
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God damn the English sucks. Like it's really bad. I can't express it enough. It's comical at times how painful it is reading broken English. In addition, the autocorrect is awful as well. It's fucks up so many words and makes the verbiage absolutely horrible. Once past the broken English, however, the story is actually of great quality. The characters are great and it is a very interesting and different take on the Naruto world. It was kind of disappointing that Might Guy was changed into a girl but oh well. If you could get an editor or try to improve your English by actually proof reading what you upload, it would be so much better. Thanks for the great story!

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Orochi is not bad or at least worse than tobirama who invented the technique, I just feel that he was frustrated by what made him hiruzen in his investigations and the defeat by itachi that made him seek the sharingan for god they are a ninja village and they are scared by human experiments.

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Great story would highly recommend it to anyone who wants a fresh take of Naruto or the world or Naruto in general.

Dao_Of_Realism
Dao_Of_RealismLv3Dao_Of_Realism

This fanfic novel is one of the best I've ever ridden, I recommend this to you people. Don't miss this great story. Ohhhhh also try to support the author so he won't drop this novel. One last thing, We want more We watn more We want more We want more

Wyplash
WyplashLv5Wyplash

Original fanfic of naruto and really well made ! The caracter are hardworking and they each have they story wich make everything much more interesting. A little bit of romance and great story so far. Continu the good work !!

_Leylin_
_Leylin_Lv3_Leylin_

This novel has a lot of potential and till now at chapter 35 is going smoothly! There are a lot of interesting parts that never apperead in any other novel I`ve read! Also the word flow in a rythm that has a lot of sinergy with what appear to be a very nice mc! The mc is not without faults but who has no faults and those make the mc more human and even with all the things he does in the novel! Love this novel! Thanks for the novel! Mass release please!

L3G4C9
L3G4C9Lv1L3G4C9

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ElPiwo
ElPiwoLv6ElPiwo

According to current chapter. this novel is great at all things. Good focus on character design and story development (which are already pretty good) .

Dragonia_101
Dragonia_101Lv6Dragonia_101

According to current chapter. this novel is great at all things. tho i do stay to put a bit more focus on character design and story development (which are already pretty good)

Xxluka
XxlukaLv5Xxluka

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Tom_Sky
Tom_SkyLv3Tom_Sky

The fate of the sword. Asuma. That's good, it's not as trivial as another Uchiha/Naruto. I really like the look at familiar characters. The author has an individual view of the characters. Humor is present. It's a good story.

iokochi
iokochiLv3iokochi

If you add some new characters will be good.And what do you think about the mc learning with the 4th hokage the hiraishin no jutsu.Another thing it's about the mc's kekkei genkai, why he didn't use that?

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