Review Detail of RandomSwordsThief in Reborn in the Shinobi World as a Sarutobi

The story is interesting, but there is a lack of research. For example, Hayate is four years younger than Asuma, but the writer made them the same age. Gender-bending, I can't even comprehend my hatred for it. The idea of having Sharingan abilities without the Sharingan is genius, and I applaud him/her for it! Finally, detest how the mc spent a lot of time on other characters rather than growing stronger himself. Overall, good concept, but with a poor application? Not my cup of tea, though others might like it. I suggest re-engineering the fic.