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KnightShade420
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This story has promise but it has a ton of stuff that irritates me. First of all the vocabulary of some of the characters doesn't make sense. The Hokage is using the word totally in his vocabulary as if he is an ignorant high schooler rather than a highly learned leader of a village that is nicknamed "The Professor". I love Op Mc's which this mc is but I hate Mc's who think that they can take other characters and make them Op just because he trained them. That's not how it works. The mc has cheats that give him a huge advantage so it makes sense his speed of advancement but at age 6 all his friends can beat chuunin and have mid chuunin level chakra is ridiculous. The author also doesn't really realize how chakra intensive some techniques are. 7-8 years old can not use A or even B rank Jutsu. Kage bunshin no jutsu is restricted to jonin level ninjas because of many reasons. One is that an average jonin with a jonin level chakra and control can only use it to make 3-4 Kage bunshins and that's it. An 8-year-old kid with a chuunin level chakra and control can summon 7-8 Kage bunshins to do his moonlight style Kenjutsu. Another thing that annoys me is that the author confuses kenjutsu with taijutsu and it irritates me a lot. There are other things that irritate me but I don't want to write more.

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Reborn in the Shinobi World as a Sarutobi

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DarkKnight32
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you uhave read a lot of chapters i guess pls tell me if mc will get a normal wife or that devil will have him from the chapter title i can see mc didnt go to one date with a girl also his love intest from the anime has turned into a boy (wtf author). did the author really make this story no romance

Devil_Hex
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Thanks for the review mate. Saved my time 👍

A_Sinner
A_SinnerLv3A_Sinner

Thanks man save me my time on this Santa mc novel

MsGaya
MsGayaLv12MsGaya

My thoughts exactly !