Review Detail of Ryxvert in Reborn in the Shinobi World as a Sarutobi

umm first of all the grammar is just bad i cant read it past ch3 even if im curious about your story... sorry there... hopefully you can use gramerly or other grammar checker before you post it here or update it later on.. please... because i think the premise for this story is good please tell me if it become better and what ch it start from?