Reviews of Reborn as Naruto's Twin Brother

Sorry for the ones who want this story to be a harem because I am not going to make it something like that but I will, of course, try to make it a good love story and there might be more than one girl for me but that will depend. Also, the story will be concentrated more on action than anything else and sometimes a slice of life with full of fun as the story progresses on. One last thing my English is not good enough. So don't read if you can't understand but If you continue reading than tell me which part you are unable to read in your comment and I will try my best to fix that part of the story. Thank you for reading.

Well, based on just the first chapter this has potential. I'd be lying if I said the name Kirito didn't bother me, but I look forward to the future of this story.

The story is too good but i was hopeing the mc is going to play around with so many girls if ur not buildjng a harem. Also hinata is meh man maybe do konan (If you can Do it in the plot) hanabi is good too (if she is not too Young(personally my preferance)

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it's not very interesting, most of this story is a regular flare .......................................................................................

The idea behind the story is good. But a lot of editing is necessary. The English quality us very bad and sometimes it is hard to read. The narration is also too rushed and lacks personality. And please use punctuation!! It's making me breathless. The main character is so confusing. His personality is quite plain. Textbook like. And sometimes too forced. As for the story development and world background there is nothing to say. It okay. But the story is worth it. It has potential. Continue to improve yourself Lord Author and thank you for the story.

Very good.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

A very good naruto story. Keep up the good work. The only thing, that could be better is the grammar. But nevertheless well written.....................

Usually i dont read naruto twin fanfics cause they all have cring name like kirito or something like that but this seems to have Potential 🔥⚜️

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Ohhhh glad that you remake it. ...If im not wrong the last time he become an anbu and fight with otsutsuki clan? And he is not even 15 and use 9th gate? Maybe i read a wrong fanfic😂😂

I love this novel some people might hate the grammar but I dont really care I just more chapters so please update more so I can enjoy it more and have some R-18 part already

Author, if you've seen (https://tioanime.com/anime/shinmai-maou-no-keiyakusha), you couldn't try writing a story, looking at your history of several stories you have.

Reveal spoiler

It`s chapter number 26 and he still is not a genin. I guess Kirito-san lost all his skills after reincarnation, no beater anymore (Yeah i know it`s not Kirigaya-kun, but it`s fair for me, duh). Despite that, the story is very interesting and it oppend my eyes to some crimes of Grin.. Hiruzen. And don`t drop it pls. Are we good? ... Yes? ... Yes :)))

Well i like the story, thought it still have some grammatical mistake i think it would be better as time goes on. Hope you keep the good work and didn't drop this.

So far the story is pretty good. It has potential to be a treasure in the future. The build up is pretty good so far for the story. Some common grammar mistakes, but the ability to understand the story is there. All in all a good start and read for a Naruto Fan Fic.

This story is click bait it’s not a real reincarnation the mc has his memories wiped and is a pedophile.

translation not that good some words are missing or some just aren't even words at all

Quite a good read but not the quality you would expect for a novel with 4.5 rating. The text needs a bit of editing and the writing format needs to be fixed. Reading it almost made me sleepy. The character of the mc also needs to be expanded cuz he felt really boring to read. Good story premise and idea though. The author should've made things more interesting and less boring. Honestly, this fanfic felt like a raft joined together by a single rope. The ideas are too scattered and not connected with each other. The story progression feels forced sometimes as a result. It's as if the author never had the outline of the story in mind and it was written by spontaneous bursts of inspiration and joined together poorly. I'd say that the quality of the story would be between 3.0 - 3.5 stars.