Review Detail of MsGaya in Reborn as Naruto's Twin Brother

The idea behind the story is good. But a lot of editing is necessary. The English quality us very bad and sometimes it is hard to read. The narration is also too rushed and lacks personality. And please use punctuation!! It's making me breathless. The main character is so confusing. His personality is quite plain. Textbook like. And sometimes too forced. As for the story development and world background there is nothing to say. It okay. But the story is worth it. It has potential. Continue to improve yourself Lord Author and thank you for the story.