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Dave_Guest3mthCommentedTry purple
Valeria Richards(Pics)- Dave_Guest3mthCommented
Ultramarines?
"Black Templars." - Dave_Guest4mthCommented
I wouldn’t create too many serums or add any more powers to the Mc. I would try to destroy the negatives of the vampirism. If you add any of those OP Serums or anything like that it will ruin the mood of twilight. And the MC can already grow his advantages without all the tinkering.
(a/n: comment some other serum/improvements the mc could make, I don't remember a lot of them. It doesn't matter what fiction it's from, I'll look into any suggestion and go from there.) - Dave_Guest4mthCommented
Will his eye grwo back?
Grisha's face was shaky now, his imminent fear rising. No, not because of the Founder Titan's words but because of the person behind him in a jacket... Whose eye was glowing in purple unmitigated rage. - Dave_Guest5mthCommented
I would have chosen the mother.
Jake thought about it. He could pick Luke, Anakin, Revan, and Yoda. But as he thought he remembered Galen Marik. Marik, while not appearing in anything after the force unleashed games and tie-in media, showed he had enormous potential that was unexplored. His force potential alone seemed to rival Vader and Sidious . He made his choice, and God nodded. "As you wish." Jake was then consumed by a flash of light. - Dave_Guest5mthCommentedCh -1 Mc powers and images.
- Dave_Guest6mthCommented
This is interesting, but you should integrate Whitebeard in the magic system. And it would be really funny, if he was as big as in the original. And of course please deage him.
Fairy Tail Whitebeard - Dave_Guest6mthCommented
Apocalypse is his father for sure. At least I don’t remember any other old strong earthling. And I think Hela fought him at some point.
On the other hand he's absolutely terrifying… that unbelievably high affinity for death, the vision I and many other seers felt before his birth, plus the fact he's half midgardian. - Dave_Guest6mthCommented
Ne careful with those special writings. Some fanfics were banned because of it.
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Should have sacrificed that stupid plot armor.
Finally she smiled warmly at him," That was just a test. Your wish will be granted and you would not need to sacrifice any of your abilities either. Contrary I will provide a very useful gift for your future endeavors in the marvel universe." - Dave_Guest10mthCommented
Well there would be: Omni force Void force Origin force Force of Devouring
Author Rant: Now I have run into a problem, I can't figure out a name for Dante's force and I can't keep calling it 'the force' every time so I need suggestions. - Dave_Guest10mthCommented
It’s actually the curse of love.
This paragraph has been deleted. - Dave_Guest1yrCommented
I think it would be pretty broken to summon being from Tesura. They would be able to use Ultimate skills and work on a complete different system than danmachi. It would be pretty hard to write as well. Why sont you let him summon beings from the tower. Like goblins an such. You can make improvements to the skill, so he can summon beings from other floors. Summoned beings need to obey commands. That would solve many problems.
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