Review Detail of Toxic_318 in Reborn as Naruto's Twin Brother

Quite a good read but not the quality you would expect for a novel with 4.5 rating. The text needs a bit of editing and the writing format needs to be fixed. Reading it almost made me sleepy. The character of the mc also needs to be expanded cuz he felt really boring to read. Good story premise and idea though. The author should've made things more interesting and less boring. Honestly, this fanfic felt like a raft joined together by a single rope. The ideas are too scattered and not connected with each other. The story progression feels forced sometimes as a result. It's as if the author never had the outline of the story in mind and it was written by spontaneous bursts of inspiration and joined together poorly. I'd say that the quality of the story would be between 3.0 - 3.5 stars.