Reviews of Path to Eternity

It was an interesting story to some extent, and then it became boring, for me. I'm not saying it's bad but it became monotonous... The only thing I loved was the personality of the MC And its evolution.

i have only one question, where did you get the cover photo author? ..........................................................................

1. The MC has no real motivation 2. I hope you understand the scale of power that exists among sprinters The fastest flash in the entire multiverse can degrade everyone in a city in 0.00001 seconds 3. That you explore the DC muntiverse now that all speeds can age between different realities 4.you have to give him more abilities that relate to each other 5.power scale the mc currently couldn't take on flash or most justice league minus superman

Consdering all the dark themes in the story it is suprisingly just monotone. Author doesn’t manage to bring any life to the story. Plot is pretty much non-existent, MC just does what he wants which is mostly just crimes of various degrees, some more gruesome than the others but mostly it’s pretty dark themed but the delivery is lacking. MC himself just feels hollow without any depth to him which makes this a pretty boring read.

Honestly, it's not to my liking, the MC is extremely disturbed and is a cannibal, although I don't have problems with psychopathic MCs, since the Villain's Retirement, Riley isn't much worse than the MC here, the fact that he's a cannibal gives me deeply disgusted to the point of not being able to enjoy the story

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I constantly ask myself why I am reading this..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

hey antinoob when's your next novel. got any plans? I think I'm ur biggest fan like I check ur profile every week to see if u write something new. hope you do. ✌️

One thing is for sure that this ff is not for someone who hates very evil MC. MC is just a psychopath and his only goal was to become strongest.(I had read till he gets his speed force and his parallel self stays in his universe.) There is almost no personality development, which is the weak point. MC is just like: oh I'm born psycho and will do psycho work, which somehow fits perfectly fine for the story. There is a lot of Cannibalism, blood and gore. But this is also the unique thing about this ff. The darkness in this ff, it's just too much. I really love to read ff, specially anti-hero and Villians MCs, but this ff is just too much into evil stuff. It's just that author had taken it too very deeper level, but nonetheless, the plot is awesome. BTW, author, you should take some time to fresh off your mind because sometimes writing such stuffs can cause mental and personality changes. Take care because this ff is just too dark and you might feel stressed while writing it.

La verdad es que es la primera mala calificación que doy, incluso si una historia me parece basura no digo nada para no desanimar al escritor. En este caso debo decir que el escritor debería dejar de escribir (quizá incluso consultar un psicólogo, por no decir internarse directamente en el loquero). Recomiendo no leer, no solo es una pérdida de tiempo, sino también una muy (asquerosa, perturbadora, preocupante) experiencia.

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Its a good fanfic with quite a good storyline. It started well and the mc developed. When it got near to the end you could tell the author was going to finish soon and it just seemwd a bit rushed. Overall a very good fic

Just plain bad. The character is just plain and simple deranged. There is no method to his madness or anything interesting like that. He just wants to hurt people. It's not a very interesting story. While I absolutely prefer dark and evil characters, this one just isn't interesting in the slightest. Evil for the sake of evil is poor writing.

Finding Evil & Crazy MC Fan-fics are rare and finding over 100 chaps is finding a gold in the place filled with garbage I think that MC need some morw development and less nerfing don't be a sadistic Author writing quality needs work as when MC came to the 2nd world in starting it got confusing Since i haven't watched anything related to DC and all my knowledge comes from Fan-fics do i can say anything bout it Updating frequency is between good and ok ok I'll give this a 4-4.5 ratings as finding EVIL MC Fan-fic is rare Also Author-San you should add Evil MC and CRAZY MC tags i was just lucky enough to find this

What is the second world on volume 2 as a cant pick it up from story ?? love BOOK BTW

It was an interesting novel, but a lot of abilities started to become boring without a challenge. In the future, I hope that you will create a hero that gradually develops and without supernatural abilities such as immortality, rapid renewal and human control, this is boring, thank you.

First the concept is original the story was a bit slow at first but picks up and you start to get into it keep up good work !! GOOD STUFF

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Not the best fanfic i've read but it's a good one the mc is evil and has lots of character development throughout the story and going by fanfic standards he's already a thousand times better than most fanfic mc's. From what i can tell the author really wants the mc to be a representation of the most cruel sides of humanity if i had to compare him to someone i think joker would be the best compersone. smart , evil, and crazy. overall the author did a good job with the main character and i can actually see someone like him being 1 of the big bads that face off against the justice league. Has he goes against everything heros stand for the interactions with them are really fun for me to read. Ways the story can improve: First off the mc i know i said lots of good things about him before but no mc is perfect . The mc has lots of powers and good abilities but there's also a downside to that at times the mc feels like a wall to throw heros at and watch them cras. in the elier parts of the story the mc took some l's which was refreshing though i don't want him to lose all the time once in a while makes the story less predictable from major l's to small l's. another thing is the mc's personality at times it comes of has a bit bland has him being evil for the sake of being evil. for a villain this build sometimes works but for an mc not so much it makes it harder has a reader to understand the mc's motives or is goals or just the point of the story you should make it so the mc has more emotion we already know his reason for being evil is that he thinks it's fun and that he wants to be a god but following that road smoothly without losing or feeling emotions like rage make the journey a lot less fun. last thing the mc is too cold he doesn't have a single person or thing he cares about make it so he at least has someone he cares about i mean with how things are now he feels like a brick. if you doubt me i'll give you an example a character like yoshikage kira he was an evil and terrible person yet for some reason i could vibe with him not every aspect of his character just some of them and that was because of the moments i spent with has a character . i remember that some point in the novel the mc had a talk with luther about is guilt before becoming a kree i want more moments like that is what i'm trying to say . i would also recommend rereading your story from chapter one and seeing what aspects you liked about the story.

+10 👍