You haVe no idea how many times I almost wrote Pidgeot instead of Pigeon🙈
I love the unique idea of the novel, and the fact that MC is an author makes it easy to sympathize with him. Truly a lovely new setting, can't wait for the author to publish more chapters.
This is off to a great start. I like how it's clear where the system came from and gives a backstory of the MC right away. Highly recommend.
The story has a lot of potential, is well-paced, and flows smoothly. The MC is interesting and well-thought-out There are some typos and grammatical errors but with an editor, those can be easily resolved.
The quality of writing is excellent, the characters are well thought out and the book has a tint of humor which makes it truly a delight to read. The start is also very captivating, instantly drawing you into a new world.
The story is off to a great start. The novel goes into great detail and describes the surroundings very well, making it truly come alive while keeping an air of mystery around it. The grammar is excellent and there aren't any mistakes which makes this a smooth read. I truly look forward to new chapters.
I find the plot of the novel truly unique. At least I haven't stumbled upon anything like it before. While the novel is only 14 chapters long, the chemistry between Prim and Benjamin is truly well done and instantly makes the reader feel close to them. This novel is truly worth a read.
Truly loved how the novel goes into great detail and describes the MC in depth. Also I truly love novels about supernatural creatures like werewolves and vampires so I highly recommend this to everyone with similar taste.
The plot is unique and truly a breath of fresh air. The characters are very well written and have depth. Hope you keep on writing, this truly is an interesting novel. :)
So I just finished the second chapter, and it's already 3 a.m. I just briefly skimmed the chapter through do forgive me if there are any mistakes and if/when you do find them please let me know and I will correct them first thing in the morning. I wanted to get this chapter out before going to sleep.
Thanks :) corrected it.