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MadFool

MadFool

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  • MadFool
    MadFool29d
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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  • MadFool
    MadFool7mth
    Replied to Ryviria

    You haVe no idea how many times I almost wrote Pidgeot instead of Pigeon馃檲

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    The Man Who Manipulated Reality
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  • MadFool
    MadFool1yr
    Posted

    I love the unique idea of the novel, and the fact that MC is an author makes it easy to sympathize with him. Truly a lovely new setting, can't wait for the author to publish more chapters.

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    A Writer's Deadline
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  • MadFool
    MadFool1yr
    Replied to Rainbow_Phoenixx

    Also thanks for reading so far :)

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  • MadFool
    MadFool1yr
    Replied to Rainbow_Phoenixx

    I didn't want to make the two MC's too much alike in fear of it getting boring, so I made one that was naturally gifted and stronger with a good background while the other one has to struggle to get what he wants.

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  • MadFool
    MadFool1yr
    Posted

    This is off to a great start. I like how it's clear where the system came from and gives a backstory of the MC right away. Highly recommend.

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    Tamer of Cosmic Beasts
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  • MadFool
    MadFool1yr
    Replied to Shuyuka

    Glad you liked it :)

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    Rise of the Divine Empire
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  • MadFool
    MadFool1yr
    Replied to ZeroSerei

    Thank you very much :)

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  • MadFool
    MadFool1yr
    Posted

    The story has a lot of potential, is well-paced, and flows smoothly. The MC is interesting and well-thought-out There are some typos and grammatical errors but with an editor, those can be easily resolved.

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    I am the King of the Undead (has now been moved)
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  • MadFool
    MadFool1yr
    Posted

    The quality of writing is excellent, the characters are well thought out and the book has a tint of humor which makes it truly a delight to read. The start is also very captivating, instantly drawing you into a new world.

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    Epico
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  • MadFool
    MadFool1yr
    Posted

    The story is off to a great start. The novel goes into great detail and describes the surroundings very well, making it truly come alive while keeping an air of mystery around it. The grammar is excellent and there aren't any mistakes which makes this a smooth read. I truly look forward to new chapters.

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    RE: Access
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  • MadFool
    MadFool1yr
    Posted

    I find the plot of the novel truly unique. At least I haven't stumbled upon anything like it before. While the novel is only 14 chapters long, the chemistry between Prim and Benjamin is truly well done and instantly makes the reader feel close to them. This novel is truly worth a read.

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    ~Woke~
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  • MadFool
    MadFool1yr
    Posted

    Truly loved how the novel goes into great detail and describes the MC in depth. Also I truly love novels about supernatural creatures like werewolves and vampires so I highly recommend this to everyone with similar taste.

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    The Hidden Alpha
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  • MadFool
    MadFool1yr
    Posted

    The plot is unique and truly a breath of fresh air. The characters are very well written and have depth. Hope you keep on writing, this truly is an interesting novel. :)

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    Alive bond
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  • MadFool
    MadFool1yr
    Commented

    Once again, please point out any mistakes you find. Thank you :) Hope you have enjoyed reading so far

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  • MadFool
    MadFool1yr
    Commented

    This is the last chapter of the prologue. As always, if you find some mistakes please point them out. Hope you have enjoyed this so far.

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  • MadFool
    MadFool1yr
    Commented

    This will be the second last chapter of the prologue and then the main story will truly kick-off. Hope you guys have enjoyed this so far.

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  • MadFool
    MadFool1yr
    Commented

    So I just finished the second chapter, and it's already 3 a.m. I just briefly skimmed the chapter through do forgive me if there are any mistakes and if/when you do find them please let me know and I will correct them first thing in the morning. I wanted to get this chapter out before going to sleep.

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  • MadFool
    MadFool1yr
    Replied to SenseiMasterAction

    Thank you, hope I won't disappoint. :)

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  • MadFool
    MadFool1yr
    Replied to SenseiMasterAction

    Thanks :) corrected it.

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