Review Detail of trueimmortal in Path to Eternity

Not the best fanfic i've read but it's a good one the mc is evil and has lots of character development throughout the story and going by fanfic standards he's already a thousand times better than most fanfic mc's. From what i can tell the author really wants the mc to be a representation of the most cruel sides of humanity if i had to compare him to someone i think joker would be the best compersone. smart , evil, and crazy. overall the author did a good job with the main character and i can actually see someone like him being 1 of the big bads that face off against the justice league. Has he goes against everything heros stand for the interactions with them are really fun for me to read. Ways the story can improve: First off the mc i know i said lots of good things about him before but no mc is perfect . The mc has lots of powers and good abilities but there's also a downside to that at times the mc feels like a wall to throw heros at and watch them cras. in the elier parts of the story the mc took some l's which was refreshing though i don't want him to lose all the time once in a while makes the story less predictable from major l's to small l's. another thing is the mc's personality at times it comes of has a bit bland has him being evil for the sake of being evil. for a villain this build sometimes works but for an mc not so much it makes it harder has a reader to understand the mc's motives or is goals or just the point of the story you should make it so the mc has more emotion we already know his reason for being evil is that he thinks it's fun and that he wants to be a god but following that road smoothly without losing or feeling emotions like rage make the journey a lot less fun. last thing the mc is too cold he doesn't have a single person or thing he cares about make it so he at least has someone he cares about i mean with how things are now he feels like a brick. if you doubt me i'll give you an example a character like yoshikage kira he was an evil and terrible person yet for some reason i could vibe with him not every aspect of his character just some of them and that was because of the moments i spent with has a character . i remember that some point in the novel the mc had a talk with luther about is guilt before becoming a kree i want more moments like that is what i'm trying to say . i would also recommend rereading your story from chapter one and seeing what aspects you liked about the story.